Question

I had a interesting dream last night. I dreamedthat I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn’t lose heart and keptrunning. All the students on the playground cheer me on, “ Come on!” I was so encouraging that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if flying like a superman. In the end, I got to the finishing line first.I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that timeI woke up and found me still in bed!

Answer 1

I had a interesting dream last night. I dreamedthat I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run
An                                                                去掉to  
very fast and fell behind. So I didn’t lose heart and keptrunning. All the students on the
But
playground cheer me on, “ Come on!” I was so encouraging that I ran faster and fast till I caught up
cheered                       encouraged                 faster
∧all the other runners. I felt as if flying like a superman. In the end, I got to the finishing line first.
with
I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my
proud
classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that timeI woke up and found me still in bed! 
Classmates                                                    myself
【小題1】a改成 an
【小題2】去掉to，
【小題3】So改成 But
【小題4】cheer 改成Cheered
【小題5】encouraging encouraged
【小題6】fast 改成faster
【小題7】caught up 后面加with
【小題8】proudly改成proud
【小題9】classmate改成 Classmates
【小題10】me 改成myself

解析試題分析：
【小題1】dream是可數名詞，這里是指又一個有趣的夢。
【小題2】情態(tài)動詞后面直接接動詞原形。
【小題3】上下文存在轉折關系。
【小題4】本文是一般過去時為主。
【小題5】encouraging修飾物“令人鼓舞的”，encouraged修飾人“受到鼓舞的”
【小題6】越來越快，都應該使用比較級。
【小題7】固定詞組catch up with追上，趕上
【小題8】feel后面接形容詞，構成系表結構。
【小題9】one of 后面要接復數名詞。 
【小題10】用反身代詞加強語氣
考點：考查短文改錯
點評：本題考查較為細致，要求考生要特別耐心答題中注意句子中人稱和數是否一致，時態(tài)是否一致。各種詞性之間的區(qū)別以及一些常用句型，固定短語的應用。一般的這類題型不會出現太復雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考察基礎知識較多。平時應注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結構。修改前先細讀短文，標出出錯的位置，改完以后還得細讀短文，看看改過后的短文是否語意通順。