Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

At present, I am extremely happy because I am doing all what I like. As a senior three student, I study hard every day and live it to the full. It feels well to study hard with my determining classmates to fulfill our dreams. When I was recalled the happy things which happened to me, the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped it all. It was a time when my family is going through financial difficulties. So I made up my mind to win the scholarship, hoped to lighten my parents financial burden. After making tons of painstaking efforts, I succeeded. On the ceremony, my mom was the most poorly-dressed woman, and with the brightest smile on her face.

Answer 1

【答案】1.In present改為At present或者In the present

2.all what改為all that或者去掉what 或者去掉all.

3.feel well 改為feel good

4.determining改為determined

5.was recalled去掉was

6.toppde it 改為topped them

7.is going 改為was going

8.hopde改為hoping

9.parents改為parents’

10.and with改為but with

【解析】1.In present改為At present或者In the present

2.all what改為all that或者去掉what 或者去掉all.

考查定語從句。先行詞是all，故關(guān)系代詞只能用that，all that=what， what引導(dǎo)名詞從句。所以all what改為all that.

3.feel well 改為feel good

考查系表結(jié)構(gòu)。feel 系動詞后要用形容詞good改為feel.

4.determining改為determined

考查形容詞。determining→determined。此處修飾classmates，故用determined表示“有決心的，意志堅定的”。

5.was recalled去掉was

考查語態(tài)。當(dāng)我們加快曾經(jīng)的快樂。我們回憶，不是我們被回憶而是回憶，was recalled去掉was。

6.toppde it 改為topped them

考查代詞。topped it→topped them�？疾榇�詞。此處指的是上文提到的"the happy things",應(yīng)用them。

7.is going 改為was going

考查時態(tài)。那是我的家庭曾經(jīng)歷經(jīng)濟困難的時候。曾經(jīng)要，is going→was going�？疾閯釉~的時態(tài)。根據(jù)前面的"It was a time when"可知,此處說的是過去的情況,故用一般過去時。

8.hopde改為hoping

hoped→hoping。我下定決心要贏得獎學(xué)金，以此希望減輕父母的經(jīng)濟負(fù)擔(dān)�？疾榉侵^語動詞。此處需要用現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語。

9.parents改為parents’。

考查形容詞性。希望減輕父母的經(jīng)濟負(fù)擔(dān)，父母的經(jīng)濟負(fù)擔(dān)，parents 改為parents’

10.and with改為but with

考查連詞。我媽媽是穿著最寒酸的女人，但她的臉上帶著最燦爛的笑容。上下文之間有邏輯上的轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,故用轉(zhuǎn)折連詞yet/but。