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7．近年來我市大力打造旅游產(chǎn)業(yè)，以此推動(dòng)經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展．現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，談?wù)?你的看法并就此提出建議．

主要優(yōu)點(diǎn)	促進(jìn)交流，了解我市歷史文化；提供就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)，推動(dòng)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展．
負(fù)面影響	破壞環(huán)境，造成污染；游客大量涌入，引起交通堵塞．
你的建議	…

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇要點(diǎn)文．寫作時(shí)，首先要寫全要點(diǎn)，包括：優(yōu)點(diǎn)，缺點(diǎn)，建議；其次要用第一人稱來敘述；最后要以現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主．
重點(diǎn)短語和句型：
speed up the development 加快發(fā)展
crowd in 大量涌入
keep the balance of nature 保持自然平衡
be aware of 知道，清楚，明白
It can also provide more chances for jobs，which leads to the quick development of local economy．
句中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句．
What's more，too many tourists crowding in will bring about heavy traffic jams．
句中crowding in是現(xiàn)在分詞修飾主語．
it's necessary to develop tourism to benefit both the local people and economy．
it is+形容詞+動(dòng)詞不定式，表示做某事怎樣；it是形式主語，真正的主語是后面的動(dòng)詞不定式．

解答 There are many tourist sites in our region．These years，the city government has been speeding up the development of the tourism industry．Tourism can promote cultural exchange and help people learn about local history．It can also provide more chances for jobs，which leads to the quick development of local economy．（高分句型一）Besides，it can enrich our lives and improve our living conditions．【說明優(yōu)點(diǎn)】
      However，tourism may cause serious pollution and do damage to the natural environment．What's more，too many tourists crowding in will bring about heavy traffic jams．（高分句型二）【指出缺點(diǎn)】
     In my opinion，it's necessary to develop tourism to benefit both the local people and economy．（高分句型三） Meanwhile，some measures should be taken to keep the balance of nature and at the same time we should get more people to be aware of environment protection．【提出建議】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書面表達(dá)題考查的是英語的應(yīng)用能力．寫作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對(duì)；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．