Question

16．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．作文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏子符號(hào)（∧）并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Though a great progress has been made in science these years，there are still many people live in poor conditions．They made their lives by collecting and selling used things．Their children cannot go to school while they have not enough money to send their children there．Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now？The answer lies on the population explosion．A president of a developing country once said；"It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to"produce"child without limit．"Although this few words sound simple enough，they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion．

Answer 1

分析 短文講述了近些年科學(xué)取得了巨大進(jìn)步，但仍有些人生活在貧困之中，他們通過收售廢品為生，甚至沒錢送孩子去上學(xué)，造成這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的原因就是人口的劇增，一位發(fā)展中國家的總統(tǒng)說過："我們自己要為貧窮負(fù)責(zé)，因?yàn)檫^去我們好哇節(jié)制地生了一大群孩子"，簡短的一句話清楚地指出了人口劇增導(dǎo)致的后果．

解答 Though a great progress has been made in science these years，there are still many people livein poor conditions．They made 
         去掉a                                                                                                                 living
their livesby collecting and selling used things．Their children cannot go to school while they have not enough money to send
      living                                                                                                         because
their children there．Why∧you think so many people still suffer from poverty now？The answer lies on the population explosion．
                                      do                                                                                                          in
A president of a developing country once said；"It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to"produce"child without
                                                                              we                                                                                         children
limit．"Although this few words sound simple enough，they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion
                         these                                                             clearly
1．去掉great前面的a；考查名詞，progress是不可數(shù)名詞，前面不能加a．
2．live改為living；考查分詞，這里living現(xiàn)在分詞短語作后置定語，修飾people．
3．lives改為living；考查名詞，make one's living 是固定搭配，意為"謀生"．
4．while改為because；考查連詞，while意為"然而，當(dāng)…時(shí)候"，because表示原因，根據(jù)句意，這里應(yīng)該用because．
5．why后面加do；考查助動(dòng)詞，在這個(gè)句子中助動(dòng)詞do幫助構(gòu)成特殊疑問句．
6．on改為in；考查介詞，lie in 是固定用法，意為"存在于，取決于"．
7．us改為we；考查代詞，這是一個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句，在這個(gè)句子中we作主語，即we are to blame…所以用主格形式．
8．child改為children；考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)，根據(jù)句意人們無限制地生了許多孩子，所以要用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
9．this改為these；考查指示代詞，這里后面用了名詞復(fù)數(shù)words，所以要用these．
10．clear改為clearly；考查副詞，這里用副詞clearly修飾動(dòng)詞短語point out．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)時(shí)要整體理解短文的中心思想，弄清短文的基本時(shí)態(tài)，再具體分析句子中的基本語言點(diǎn)，找出錯(cuò)誤加以修改．