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【題目】假定你是李華，目前在英國某中學(xué)做交換生。學(xué)校公告欄上一則出售二手筆記本電腦的廣告引起了你的興趣。

FOR SALE

Lenovo Yoga 300 laptop in excellent condition

4GB RAM and 64 GB hard drive

Price:155

Contact Heck at jheck@aef.com

請用英語寫一封電子郵件，咨詢有關(guān)電腦的詳情。內(nèi)容主要包括：

1.表明寫作意圖；

2.詢問相關(guān)信息：是否有原始購機發(fā)票（invoice),是否維修過，如何付款。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，已使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總次數(shù)。

Dear Heck,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Heck,

I am writing for more information about the laptop advertised on the school bulletin board. I would appreciate it if you could be kind enough to answer the following question. First of all, do you still have the original invoice for the laptop? Secondly, I would like to know whether the laptop has any problems. Have you ever had it repaired? Lastly, where and how can we conclude a deal if both of us agree to one? By the way, would it be possible to give me a 10% discount considering the storage of the laptop is rather small.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文要求用英語寫一封電子郵件，咨詢有關(guān)電腦的詳情。內(nèi)容主要包括：1.表明寫作意圖；2.詢問相關(guān)信息：是否有原始購機發(fā)票（invoice),是否維修過，如何付款。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要富有變化。要注意書寫。

寫作亮點：本篇條理清楚，要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。其句式上的變化既使得文章生動而流暢，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力。例如：文章恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\用了句式I would appreciate it if you could be kind enough to answering the following question.和 Have you ever had it repaired?都表現(xiàn)出很強的對語言的熟練掌握情況。