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【題目】假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，為了增進(jìn)學(xué)生之間的交流，學(xué)生會(huì)決定在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上建立中外學(xué)生英文交流論壇，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示介紹此論壇。

目的	要點(diǎn)	細(xì)節(jié)
提供交流平臺(tái)	加強(qiáng)交流	結(jié)識(shí)朋友……
	提供幫助	學(xué)習(xí)、生活……
	獻(xiàn)計(jì)獻(xiàn)策	學(xué)校發(fā)展、校園生活……

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右。開(kāi)頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

Students’ Union has decided to set up Study BBS of our own. All of us will benefit a lot from it. It offers us chances to communicate with each other. We can exchange our learning and life experiences on it. We can share different cultures as well. What’s more, it’s a good place for us to make good friends. A life without a friend is a life without sunshine. Anyone who has difficulties with their studies and daily life can ask for help on it. If you have any good suggestions to offer , you can lend a helping hand. Good advice on how to enrich our school life and how to develop our school is also welcome. Wish you to join in and fully express your ideas.

【解析】這是一篇材料作文，文章結(jié)構(gòu)已經(jīng)大致給出，要求我們分別描述出論壇的目的、要點(diǎn)以及細(xì)節(jié)，注意用詞精準(zhǔn)。大致內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，要適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，保持文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，內(nèi)容連貫。文章一句Students’ Union has decided to set up Study BBS of our own.All of us will benefit a lot from it開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，提出文章背景為學(xué)生會(huì)論壇，并簡(jiǎn)潔明了地闡述了論壇對(duì)每個(gè)人都有好處；第二句It offers us chances to communicate with each other此處使用了動(dòng)詞不定式作chance的后置定語(yǔ)，增加了可讀性；第三句We can exchange our learning and life experiences on it；第四句We can share different cultures as well使用了短語(yǔ)as well與前面相接，繼續(xù)表明論壇的好處；第五句What’s more, it’s a good place for us to make good friends.使用了短語(yǔ)what’s more表示而且，有著承上啟下的作用，動(dòng)詞不定式作后置定語(yǔ)；第六句A life without a friend is a life without sunshine.此句是對(duì)上一句話的解釋，使用了諺語(yǔ)，給文章增添了色彩；第七句Anyone who has difficulties with their studies and daily life can ask for help on it本句使用了定語(yǔ)從句，提高了文章的水平；第八句If you have any good suggestions to offer , you can lend a helping hand使用了條件狀語(yǔ)從句。第九句Good advice on how to enrich our school life and how to develop our school is also welcome.此句也是文章亮點(diǎn)之一，使用了并列的疑問(wèn)詞+動(dòng)詞不定式的形式后置定語(yǔ)，增加了句子的復(fù)雜度，并列也顯出了文章的氣勢(shì)；最后一句Wish you to join in and fully express your ideas.使用了祈使句。在詞語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用上，也十分出彩，使用了很多精彩短語(yǔ)set up表示建立，創(chuàng)立；benefit a lot from……表示獲益匪淺；communicate with……與某人交流；as well表示也；have difficulties with……表示做某事有困難；daily life日常生活；ask for表示尋求幫助；suggestion on表示在某方面的建議；join in表示加入等等。這些短語(yǔ)的使用提升了文章的檔次，讀起來(lái)也津津有味。