Question

目前,越來越多的中學(xué)生利用周末上各種各樣的培訓(xùn)班或請家教.對(duì)此,存在不同觀點(diǎn):
1.認(rèn)為有必要有老師輔導(dǎo)比自己學(xué)好，可以彌補(bǔ)上課錯(cuò)過或沒聽懂的東西…                
2.有人認(rèn)為沒有必要, 容易養(yǎng)成依賴習(xí)慣，學(xué)生需要時(shí)間休息和娛樂…
3.你的看法。
請以Are Training Classes or Tutors Necessary? 為題,寫一篇120詞左右的作文。
參考詞匯:家庭教師:tutor

Answer 1

Some think it necessary to do so. Firstly, it's more effective to study with a teacher's help than by themselves. Secondly, you can have more chances to communicate with teachers there are more interaction between students and teachers.) . Besides, you can make up for what you miss or fail to understand in classes on weekdays.
Others think it unnecessary. For one thing, students can easily form the habit of dependence. For another, students need time for rest and recreation at weekend. What's worse, attending training classes or hiring tutors even causes some students not to listen attentively in their regular classes.
In my opinion, whether a training class or tutor is needed just depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe it's OK for you. But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money.

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。目前,越來越多的中學(xué)生利用周末上各種各樣的培訓(xùn)班或請家教.對(duì)此,存在不同觀點(diǎn):1.認(rèn)為有必要有老師輔導(dǎo)比自己學(xué)好，可以彌補(bǔ)上課錯(cuò)過或沒聽懂的東西… 2.有人認(rèn)為沒有必要, 容易養(yǎng)成依賴習(xí)慣，學(xué)生需要時(shí)間休息和娛樂…3.你的看法。要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來寫。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可，尤其注意一定要寫出自己的看法。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)120左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】Besides, you can make up for what you miss or fail to understand in classes on weekdays.這個(gè)句子中含有一個(gè)賓語從句；What's worse這個(gè)短語的使用，意思是更糟糕的是；In my opinion, whether a training class or tutor is needed just depends.這個(gè)句子中含有一個(gè)主語從句。