最近，助人為樂成為人們關(guān)注的熱點(diǎn)話題。最美的女教師張麗莉、最美的清潔工吳秀瑩、最美的司機(jī)吳斌、“托舉哥”周沖等每一個(gè)耳熟能詳?shù)拿趾螅加幸粋�(gè)感人的故事。對(duì)此，你有何感想，請(qǐng)寫一篇100詞左右的短文。文章的開頭已經(jīng)幫你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Recently more and more people focus on Zhang Lili, Wu Xiuying, Wu Bin, Zhou Chong and others alike, all of whom are highly thought of for what they did.

 

 

 

 

 

One possible version：

Recently more and more people focus on Zhang Lili, Wu Xiuying, Wu Bin, Zhou Chong and others alike, all of whom are highly thought of for what they did.

In my opinion, they’re heroes from ordinary people. There is no doubt that their deeds are bound to move the whole China and leave us to deeper meditation. As is shown from their behavior, morality lies nowhere but just around us all the time. So we should no longer cast doubt on the existence of conscience and virtue. Besides, where there is love, there is hope. Only when everybody devotes even a tiny love, can our society be warmer and more harmonious.

I do believe that happiness lies in offering help to others and we’re living and will live in a world full of love. Whatever trouble lies ahead for someone in need of help, I will also give him a hand just like these heroes mentioned above.

【解析】

試題分析：根據(jù)提示可知本文為材料作文，命題者要求學(xué)生根據(jù)材料發(fā)表自己的看法。因?yàn)槌鲱}者沒有提出具體的寫作話題，所以需要學(xué)生自己提煉出一點(diǎn)或者就材料的某一個(gè)問題進(jìn)行寫作。此類作文的結(jié)構(gòu)往往采用三段式，第一段簡(jiǎn)要敘述材料。第二段就材料發(fā)表自己的看法，一般寫三個(gè)觀點(diǎn)就足夠了。第三段總結(jié)自己的觀點(diǎn)，然后用一到兩句話升華主題。在第二段列舉個(gè)人看法時(shí)，注意邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)和過渡詞的使用，確保文章的層次清晰。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，靈活使用各種句型結(jié)構(gòu)。本文為傳統(tǒng)的三段式，第二段以短語In my opinion開始，既遵循了命題者要求“談自己的感想” 這一要求，又很好的與上文材料銜接過渡。第三段以長(zhǎng)句Whatever trouble lies ahead for someone in need of help, I will also give him a hand just like these heroes mentioned above.進(jìn)一步深化主題并表明自己的態(tài)度。本文的亮點(diǎn)在于第二段各種句型的靈活使用，例如固定結(jié)構(gòu)There is no doubt that，as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句As is shown from their behavior, morality lies nowhere but just around us all the time，倒裝句Only when everybody devotes even a tiny love, can our society be warmer and more harmonious.以及諺語where there is a will, there is a way的改寫where there is love, there is hope。這一改寫尤為出彩，表明了作者深厚的文化底蘊(yùn)和寫作功底。

 

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