Question

【題目】假如你是李華,你的美國(guó)朋友 Tom 在學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ),他聽說(shuō)很多外國(guó)人在中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)相聲,對(duì)此非常感興趣,來(lái)信詢問(wèn)有關(guān)中國(guó)相聲的情況,請(qǐng)你給他寫信回復(fù)。內(nèi)容包括:

1．介紹相聲;

2．相聲與語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)的關(guān)系。
注意:1．詞數(shù) 100 左右;

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

3．參考詞匯:相聲 comic talk Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

How are you doing? I'm writing in reply to your letter asking me about comic talk. Comic talk is a traditional Chinese way of entertainment. It's usually performed by two people but it can also be played by one person or more than two. The performers talk about topics of daily life in humorous ways. Comic talks not only amuse and refresh us, but also get us thinking about life.

Many foreigners learn Chinese comic talk because it is a good way to learn spoken Chinese and gives them a better understanding of Chinese culture. So I'm delighted that you are interested in it and I hope you can enjoy learning it.

Best wishes!

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文。所給要點(diǎn)非常明確，話題也是考生比較熟悉的。比較好寫。考生要先介紹相聲的有關(guān)知識(shí)，比如，相聲的表現(xiàn)形式。其次再談?wù)勏嗦暫蛯W(xué)習(xí)的關(guān)系。考生可先根據(jù)要點(diǎn)寫出主題句，然后再適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容。該文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。

【亮點(diǎn)分析】

所給范文要點(diǎn)明確，條理清楚，語(yǔ)言自然貼切。長(zhǎng)短句交叉使用。適當(dāng)使用了一些較好的詞匯和句式：1. 被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)It's usually performed by two people but it can also be played by one person or more than two. 2. not only…but also… 3. it is a good way to learn spoken Chinese and gives them a better understanding of Chinese culture 4. a better understanding of