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7．假設(shè)你班在"珍愛生命，拒闖紅燈"教育活動中，召開了一次主題班會，請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示，用英語寫一篇短文．

行人闖紅燈的危害	處罰措施
1．妨礙交通，影響車輛的正常行駛； 2．容易引發(fā)事故，危及他人和自身的安全； 3．…	1．批評教育，讓其意識到闖紅燈的危害； 2．當(dāng)場給予警告并罰款； 3．…

注意：1．對所給要點逐一陳述，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．詞數(shù)150左右．
參考詞匯：jaywalk vi．亂穿馬路
Cherish Your Life，Say No to Jaywalking
                                               

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇討論闖紅燈問題的短文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)（敘述行人闖紅燈的危害）和一般將來時（敘述處罰措施）為主．內(nèi)容主要包括：一點明討論的主題；二．行人闖紅燈的危害；三處罰措施．
高分句型：
1．This blocks traffic seriously affects drivers and causes accidents to happen，endangering the safety of passers-by and drivers．句子里affects 和causes 是并列的兩個謂語動詞，主語是This blocks traffic；endangering是現(xiàn)在分詞做結(jié)果狀語．
交通擁堵嚴(yán)重影響司機(jī)駕車，造成交通事故的發(fā)生，結(jié)果會危害到行人和司機(jī)的安全．
2．When caught jaywalking，the passers-by are criticized so that they will become aware of the dangers of doing so，or they are fined on the spot．句子里過去分詞caught做狀語，和主語the passers-by 之間是被動關(guān)系； so that 引導(dǎo)目的狀語，表示"為了"．
為了讓他們意識到這么做的危險，當(dāng)行人被逮到闖紅燈時，他們要受到批評或者在現(xiàn)場被罰款．

解答 Recently，we have held a class meeting to discuss the problem of passers-by crossing the street while the traffic light is red．（點明討論的主題）
     As we can see，some passers-by don't obey traffic rules and jaywalk frequently．This blocks traffic seriously，affects drivers and causes accidents to happen，endangering the safety of passers-by and drivers．【高分句型一】In a word，jaywalking produces negative effects and does not help develop good social behavior．（行人闖紅燈的危害）
     It is really a pity to see all this in our society．To deal with the situation，the government has taken some effective measures．When caught jaywalking，the passers-by are criticized so that they will become aware of the dangers of doing so，or they are fined on the spot．【高分句型二】Sometimes the traffic police will report jaywalkers at their workplace and expose them to the public．However，it will take a long time to stop passers-by from jaywalking．We should start from ourselves right now．（處罰措施）

點評 考查提綱類作文．
一篇作文的時態(tài)不應(yīng)該是通篇一致的，要根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要進(jìn)行必要的調(diào)整，從而使表達(dá)更準(zhǔn)確合理．例如本文中，在談到人們闖紅燈這一現(xiàn)象的時候，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，因為這是現(xiàn)在普遍存在的現(xiàn)象；而討論處罰措施的時候，因為只是一個建議，還沒有執(zhí)行，所以應(yīng)該用一般將來時．