Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文, 請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤, 每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧）, 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處, 多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Everyone has a dream. We are on the way to achieve it whether the way is smooth or tough. As Senior 3 student, I have the same dream as my classmates that I can be admitted to an ideal university. In the past three year, I have done everything I can to equip myself with that I have learnt from my teachers. Not only had I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got closer to my dream. Anxiety and pressure did discourage from me at times and with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I think I’ll make it.

I’m sure that there has still a long way to go to achieve my dream. No matter what challenging it is, I will make it come true. As the proverb said, “Where there’s a will, there’s a way.”

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】achieve → achieving

【2】Senior前加 a

【3】year → years

【4】that → what

【5】had → have

【6】去掉from

【7】and→ but

【8】has → is

【9】what → how

【10】said → says

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】achieve → achieving achieve→ achieving。on the way to doing sth.表示"在做……的過程中", to是介詞,后接動(dòng)名詞。

【2】Senior前加 a 這里指"作為一名高三學(xué)生",應(yīng)用不定冠詞表泛指。故在Senior前加 a。

【3】year → years 此處指"在過去的三年里",故用year的復(fù)數(shù)形式。故把year → years。

【4】that → what 這里what引導(dǎo)賓語從句并充當(dāng)其賓語,that只起連接作用。故把that → what。

【5】had → have Not only...but also連接兩個(gè)并列的分句,第二個(gè)分句用了現(xiàn)在完成時(shí),結(jié)合語境,第一個(gè)分句也應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。

【6】去掉from discourage sb. 表示"使某人灰心喪氣"。故去掉from。

【7】and→ but 前后句邏輯上構(gòu)成轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,故把and→ but。

【8】has → is There be...句型表示客觀存在,be不能換為have。故把has → is。

【9】what → how no matter how表示"無論如何……,不管怎么……",后接形容詞、副詞,相當(dāng)于however。故把what → how。

【10】said → says 本句是客觀事實(shí),故用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。As the proverb says, "Where there’s a will, there’s a way."常言道:"有志者,事竟成。"