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10．我校英語(yǔ)社擬邀請(qǐng)一位國(guó)際知名人士到校舉辦講座，現(xiàn)就受邀嘉賓向全校學(xué)生廣泛征求意見(jiàn)，假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)?jiān)谌�位備選嘉賓（one of the world's billionaires，an astronaut，a volunteer of WWF）中推薦一位并給英語(yǔ)社社長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信表達(dá)你的想法，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
1、推薦該嘉賓的理由（至少兩條）；
2、你期待的講座內(nèi)容（至少兩條）．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于100 詞；
2．無(wú)須寫(xiě)出推薦嘉賓姓名；
3．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
4．開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好．
Dear Sir，
It is such exciting news that the English club is to invite a world renowned figure to give us a lecture．
               

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，我校英語(yǔ)社擬邀請(qǐng)一位國(guó)際知名人士到校舉辦講座，現(xiàn)就受邀嘉賓向全校學(xué)生廣泛征求意見(jiàn)，假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)?jiān)谌�位備選嘉賓（one of the world's billionaires，an astronaut，a volunteer of WWF）中推薦一位并給英語(yǔ)社社長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信表達(dá)你的想法，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1、推薦該嘉賓的理由（至少兩條）；2、你期待的講座內(nèi)容（至少兩條）．寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫(xiě)全，語(yǔ)句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩．注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于100 詞； 2．無(wú)須寫(xiě)出推薦嘉賓姓名；3．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；4．開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】高級(jí)句式、高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用是這篇文章的一大亮點(diǎn)．It is such exciting news that the English club is to invite a world renowned figure to give us a lecture．句中運(yùn)用結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句；If I could recommend one，I would go for an experienced astronaut who has once set foot on another planet or lived and worked in a space station．If引導(dǎo)的虛擬語(yǔ)氣和定語(yǔ)從句完美結(jié)合；Since childhood，nothing has made me more fascinated than the blinking stars in the sky．Since的使用，句子用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)；Staring into the deep universe，I'm always left puzzled by the unknown heavens現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)；As for the speech content，what I am most curious about is the potential of discovering unknown life forms on other planets．主語(yǔ)從句在句中體現(xiàn)．

解答 Dear Sir，
       It is such exciting news that the English club is to invite a world renowned figure to give us a lecture．If I could recommend one，I would go for an experienced astronaut who has once set foot on another planet or lived and worked in a space station．（高分句型一）
       Since childhood，nothing has made me more fascinated than the blinking stars in the sky．Staring into the deep universe，I'm always left puzzled by the unknown heavens and I expect no one else can better explain the mysteries of the outer space than an astronaut．（高分句型二）Besides，an astronaut's experience is bound to inspire creativity and passion for astronomy in us young generations．Thus，it would be a crime not to follow an astronaut's lecture if we had a chance．
       As for the speech content，what I am most curious about is the potential of discovering unknown life forms on other planets．（高分句型三） The question of how astronauts carry out their daily routines in weak gravity appeals to me as well．
       I would appreciate your kind consideration of my requests．Looking forward to the lecture actually taking place．
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours respectfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．