Question

11．假設(shè)你是李華．假如你的朋友Mike 今年打算去游覽上海迪士尼樂(lè)園，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封100詞左右的信，介紹一下上海迪士尼，并給出你的建議．要點(diǎn)如下：
1．上海迪士尼將于今年6月開(kāi)業(yè)． 它是由Walt Disney Company 建造的世界上第六個(gè)主題公園．
2．據(jù)報(bào)道每天會(huì)有成千上萬(wàn)的游客去游覽．
3．它和其他迪士尼公園不同，在公園的中央有一個(gè)中國(guó)式的園林．
4．你可以在那里欣賞到綠草，鮮花和水的美景．
5．去太空山乘坐室內(nèi)過(guò)山車很刺激．和迪士尼人物合影你會(huì)非常愉快．
6．請(qǐng)你用2-3句話就交通和園內(nèi)環(huán)保方面提些建議．
Dear Mike，
I'm very glad to know you want to visit Shanghai Disneyland soon．I'd like to tell you something about it．       ．
I hope all these can be helpful to you．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文．根據(jù)題目要點(diǎn)可知用第一人稱敘述，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主．內(nèi)容包括三部分：一 引出主題；二上海迪斯尼樂(lè)園的基本情況，包括題目要求的1-5項(xiàng)要點(diǎn)；三 交通和園內(nèi)環(huán)保方面提些建議．
高分句型：
1．It is said/reported that thousands of visitors will visit it every day．句子里It 做形式主語(yǔ)代指that thousands of visitors will visit it every day．
據(jù)說(shuō)每天會(huì)有上千人來(lái)觀光．
2．What great fun you'll have taking photos with Disney characters．句子里 taking photos with Disney characters是時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)．What great fun you'll have 是感嘆句．
當(dāng)和迪士尼里的人物拍照的時(shí)候，你會(huì)多么快樂(lè)�。�

解答 Dear Mike，
   I'm very glad to know you want to visit Shanghai Disneyland soon．I'd like to tell you something about it（引出主題）．
Shanghai Disneyland will open in June．It is the sixth theme park built by Walt Disney Company in the world．It is said/reported that thousands of visitors will visit it every day（高分句型一）．It is different from others．There is a Chinese garden in the centre of the park．You can enjoy the beautiful view of green grass，fresh flowers together with water there．It is exciting to take the indoor roller coaster on Space Mountain．What great fun you'll have taking photos with Disney characters（高分句型二）．（上海迪斯尼樂(lè)園的基本情況）
I think you can go there by underground．Remember not to drop litter carelessly in the park（交通和園內(nèi)環(huán)保方面提些建議）．
I hope all these can be helpful to you．
Best wishes．
                                                           Yours，

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