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13．新課程實(shí)施以來，個別省率先取締了晚課，你所在的班級學(xué)生對是否應(yīng)取消晚課展開了一次討論．請結(jié)合下面的討論內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇短文并發(fā)表自己的看法．
贊成觀點(diǎn)反對觀點(diǎn)
1．能夠給學(xué)生更多的自主學(xué)習(xí)和休息時間；
2．有時間發(fā)展個人愛好．1．相對在家自習(xí)，在校學(xué)習(xí)效率更高；
2．通過師生交流、生生交流，學(xué)習(xí)問題可以得到及時解決．
你的觀點(diǎn)…
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右，開頭已寫好（不計(jì)入總次數(shù)）；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Recently，our class have held a heated discussion about whether evening classes should be cancelled．                       

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息新課程實(shí)施以來，個別省率先取締了晚課，你所在的班級學(xué)生對是否應(yīng)取消晚課展開了一次討論．請結(jié)合下面的討論內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇短文并發(fā)表自己的看法，寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點(diǎn)：分別從不同觀點(diǎn)和理由兩個方面來討論該話題 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：heated discussion 激烈的討論；in favor of 支持；To begin with；Besides另外；However然而；compared with與…相比；What's more，而且；deal with 應(yīng)對，處理；pros and cons正反兩方面； be inclined to 傾向于
Some of them are in favor of the idea that the evening classes should be cancelled．（高分句型一）
 Besides，students will have more time to develop their hobbies such as reading，playing sports，drawing and so on．（高分句型二）
What's more，the problems existing in study can be dealt with as soon as possible by means of communicating with teachers and cooperating with classmates．（高分句型三）
 Weighing pros and cons，I prefer studying at home because I'm willing to form the habit of being independent and I'm inclined to arrange study time myself．（高分句型四）

解答 Recently，our class has held a heated discussion about whether evening classes should be cancelled．Opinions vary from person to person．
      Some of them are in favor of the idea that the evening classes should be cancelled．（高分句型一）To begin with，cancelling evening classes means that they have more time for autonomous learning and resting．Besides，students will have more time to develop their hobbies such as reading，playing sports，drawing and so on．（高分句型二）
      However，others object to this idea．From their point of view，compared with studying at home，studying at school may lead to high study efficiency．What's more，the problems existing in study can be dealt with as soon as possible by means of communicating with teachers and cooperating with classmates．（高分句型三）
      Weighing pros and cons，I prefer studying at home because I'm willing to form the habit of being independent and I'm inclined to arrange study time myself．（高分句型四）

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．