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3．在英語課堂上，你喜歡你的老師授課時只用英語，還是英語，漢語兼用？某英語雜志社就此話題邀請中學(xué)生發(fā)表看法． 請你圍繞該話題，參考所給要點(diǎn)，選擇一種授課形式，寫一篇英語短文．
1．授課形式一：只用英語
優(yōu)點(diǎn)：有助于提高聽說能力等
缺點(diǎn)：不易聽懂等
結(jié)論：…
2．授課形式2：英語、漢語兼用
優(yōu)點(diǎn)：易于理解等
缺點(diǎn)：英語氛圍不濃等
結(jié)論：…
注意：100詞左右．
參考詞匯：atmosphere 氛圍．
How do you prefer English classes to be taught，in English only，or in both English and Chinese？
I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only．As we know，a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English well．（高分句型一）Classes taught in English provide students with such an environment．When Englishis the only language used in the classroom，students will have more opportunities to practice listening and speaking．Therefore，they will be able to learn more quickly．
However，there are also some problems with this teaching method．As we haven't mastered enough English words，sometimes we may find it difficult to follow the teacher．（高分句型二）Slow learners may even lose interest in English．
Practice makes perfect．To learn English well requires a lot of practice．Therefore，Ilike my English classes to be taught completely in English．
Or：
How do you prefer English classes to be taught？in English only，or in both English and Chinese？
I prefer my English classes to be taught in both Chinese and English．In my opinion，learning English is a step-by-step process．As middle school students，we only have a small vocabulary．If the teacher can use some Chinesein an English class，we will underst and the lesson better． （高分句型三）
Of course，an English class taught in two languages has its shortcomings．Such a class cannot create a good atmosphere for English learning．Some students will speak Chinese all the time and cannot learn English well．
If you want to learn a lesson well，you have to understand it first．To help students understand the lesson better，the teacher should use Chinese from time to time．（高分句型四）Therefore，Ilike my teacher to use both English and Chinese in teaching．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息在英語課堂上，你喜歡你的老師授課時只用英語，還是英語，漢語兼用？某英語雜志社就此話題邀請中學(xué)生發(fā)表看法． 請你圍繞該話題，參考所給要點(diǎn)，選擇一種授課形式，寫一篇英語短文．，寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：授課形式一：只用英語       優(yōu)點(diǎn)：有助于提高聽說能力等          缺點(diǎn)：不易聽懂等
結(jié)論：…
授課形式2：英語、漢語兼用
優(yōu)點(diǎn)：易于理解等              缺點(diǎn)：英語氛圍不濃等
結(jié)論：…
2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：As we know眾所周知；Therefore因此；However然而；Practice makes perfect熟能生巧；In my opinion以我的觀點(diǎn)來看；from time to time不時地；
As we know，a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English well．（高分句型一）
As we haven't mastered enough English words，sometimes we may find it difficult to follow the teacher．（高分句型二）
If the teacher can use some Chinese in an English class，we will understand the lesson better．（高分句型三）
To help students understand the lesson better，the teacher should use Chinese from time to time．（高分句型四）

解答 How do you prefer English classes to be taught，in English only，or in both English and Chinese？
       I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only．As we know，a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English well．（高分句型一）Classes taught in English provide students with such an environment．When English is the only language used in the classroom，students will have more opportunities to practice listening and speaking．Therefore，they will be able to learn more quickly．
      However，there are also some problems with this teaching method．As we haven't mastered enough English words，sometimes we may find it difficult to follow the teacher．（高分句型二）Slow learners may even lose interest in English．
      Practice makes perfect．To learn English well requires a lot of practice．Therefore，I like my English classes to be taught completely in English．
Or：
      How do you prefer English classes to be taught？in English only，or in both English and Chinese？
      I prefer my English classes to be taught in both Chinese and English．In my opinion，learning English is a step-by-step process．As middle school students，we only have a small vocabulary．If the teacher can use some Chinese in an English class，we will understand the lesson better．（高分句型三）
      Of course，an English class taught in two languages has its shortcomings．Such a class cannot create a good atmosphere for English learning．Some students will speak Chinese all the time and cannot learn English well．
      If you want to learn a lesson well，you have to understand it first．To help students understand the lesson better，the teacher should use Chinese from time to time．（高分句型四）Therefore，I like my teacher to use both English and Chinese in teaching．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．