Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Tom，來(lái)信詢問(wèn)關(guān)于你的英語(yǔ)老師的情況。請(qǐng)你按照下列提示用英語(yǔ)寫一封回信，介紹你的英語(yǔ)老師。

姓 名	王 梅	性 別	女
第一印象	熱情洋溢，精力充沛
授課特點(diǎn)	清楚條理，嚴(yán)肅耐心
師生關(guān)系	嚴(yán)格、熱心、友好、融洽
你的評(píng)價(jià)	良師益友……

注意：1. 不得簡(jiǎn)單翻譯所給提示；

2. 適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 詞數(shù)120左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tom,

You’ve asked about my English teacher in your letter, and I’m writing to tell you about her. ____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

You’ve asked about my English teacher in your letter, and I’m writing to tell you about her.

My English teacher is called Wang Mei. My first impression of Mrs Wang was that she was a beautiful young lady, enthusiastic and energetic. Now I also know that she is really good at teaching. She explains everything clearly and teaches in an organized way. She is always serious and patient with us, especially when we make mistakes. Although Mrs Wang is strict with us, we get along very well with each other. That’s because she is very kind and friendly to us. She often encourages us to work hard and is ready to offer help to us. She is considered not only a good teacher but also our best friend. We all love and respect her a lot.

Such is Mrs Wang, my English teacher.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求寫回信，是應(yīng)用文的范圍。注意條理要清晰，邏輯順序和結(jié)構(gòu)要恰當(dāng)，同時(shí)要盡量保持簡(jiǎn)潔精干的內(nèi)容，不拖泥帶水。要注意題中所給的信息，不可偏題，應(yīng)用文寫作對(duì)于文章內(nèi)容的要求是要達(dá)到寫作目的。盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】不看已經(jīng)寫好的句子。第二段第二句是一個(gè)表語(yǔ)從句 My first impression of Mrs Wang was that she was a beautiful young lady, enthusiastic and energetic. 我對(duì)于王老師的第一印象是她是一位美麗的、熱情的并且有活力的女士。第三句Now I also know that she is really good at teaching是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句。現(xiàn)在我也知道她真的很擅長(zhǎng)教學(xué)。第五句是一個(gè)when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句She is always serious and patient with us, especially when we make mistakes. 她對(duì)待我們總是嚴(yán)肅又有耐心，尤其是當(dāng)我們犯錯(cuò)的時(shí)候。文中第六句是一個(gè)although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句 Although Mrs Wang is strict with us, we get along very well with each other. 盡管王老師對(duì)很嚴(yán)格，我們之間還是相處的非常好。正文最后一句是such提前的部分倒裝句Such is Mrs Wang, my English teacher.這就是我們英語(yǔ)老師，王老師。本文除了用了一些從句之外還用了許多比較好的結(jié)構(gòu)和短語(yǔ)。Be good at擅長(zhǎng)做某事；be strict with對(duì)…很嚴(yán)格；consider（as）認(rèn)為；not only…but also不僅…而且。等等文章覆蓋了題目中的所有要點(diǎn)，是一篇比較完整的作文。