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18．假定你是李華，當(dāng)你看到公益廣告片鼓勵(lì)人們�；丶铱纯矗�向父母表達(dá)"愛"時(shí)，你很有感觸．請(qǐng)以"Ways to express love to parents"為題，寫一篇英語演講稿．
 提示：
1．在父母生日時(shí)，當(dāng)面向他們說"我愛你們"；
2．經(jīng)常關(guān)心父母的生活和身體健康狀況；
3．…
 注意：
1．總詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．開頭部分已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
Ways to express love to my parents
My der fellows，
Today I'd like to talk about ways to express love to our parents．
As everyone knows，recently people are encouraged by pubulic service advertising on TV to go home to see their parents and express their love to them
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們寫一篇以Ways to express love to parents為主題的英語演講稿．這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：公益廣告片鼓勵(lì)人們常回家看看，向父母表達(dá)"愛，在父母生日時(shí)，當(dāng)面向他們說"我愛你們"；經(jīng)常關(guān)心父母的生活和身體健康狀況．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為公益廣告片鼓勵(lì)人們�；丶铱纯�，向父母表達(dá)"愛以及自身感觸，第二部分為表達(dá)愛的方式，例如，在父母生日時(shí)，當(dāng)面向他們說"我愛你們"；經(jīng)常關(guān)心父母的生活和身體健康狀況．
重點(diǎn)短語與句型：
public service advertising 公益廣告
feel moved 感動(dòng)
As far as I am concerned就我而言
have the duty to do 有責(zé)任做某事
care for 關(guān)心
it is necessary to remember their birthdays有必要記得他們的生日，此句用了it 作形式主語
expressing our wishes to them is a good way to let them know how we love them．表達(dá)我們的祝愿是讓他們知道我們愛他們的一個(gè)好方法，此句用了動(dòng)名詞作主語
No matter what we do=whatever we do無論我們做什么，讓步狀語從句

解答 My dear fellows，
Today I'd like to talk about ways to express love to our parents．
As everyone knows，recently people have been encouraged by public service advertising on TV to go home to see their parents and express their love to them．As a middle school student，I feel moved every time I see it．（公益廣告片鼓勵(lì)人們�；丶铱纯�，向父母表達(dá)"愛以及自身感觸）
As far as I am concerned，there are various ways to express love to our parents．First，it is necessary to remember their birthdays，and expressing our wishes to them is a good way to let them know how we love them．Besides，we have the duty to care for the condition of their life and health．Most importantly，we should often help our parents as much housework as we can，particularly when they are tired．（對(duì)父母表達(dá)愛的方式）
No matter what we do，remember showing respect for our parents is one of the Chinese traditional moral values．（結(jié)論）
Thank you!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 第一步：審題，確定體裁格式、主體時(shí)態(tài)、中心人稱和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，避免填表式或履歷表式表達(dá)．
第二步：擬定提綱，創(chuàng)造良好的開端；敘述得體，布局謀篇；巧妙過渡，完美結(jié)尾．
第三步：遣詞造句，上下銜接，地道表達(dá)，行文成篇（注意"參考詞匯"的提示作用）．