16.下面短文中有10處語言錯(cuò)誤.請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞.
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其 下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃去.
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞 下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每句不超過兩個(gè)錯(cuò)誤;
2.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均 僅限一詞;
3.只允許修改10處,多者(從第1l處起)不計(jì)分.
During the weekend I traveled by the air for the first time in my life.I usual travel by train or bus.It's both cheaper and safe.But to fly in the sky was something new to me.At the end I felt a little nervous.But very soon I became exciting when I found me high up in the sky among the clouds.I also found that mountains,fields,river and so on was interestingly small.I enjoy the frightening and comfortable journey very much.After all,it is more interesting take a plane than to take a car.

分析 本文主要講述作者第一次乘飛機(jī)的感受.剛開始有點(diǎn)緊張,隨后發(fā)現(xiàn)在高高的天空看到山脈,田野,河流等是那么的小,覺得乘飛機(jī)旅行比乘車有趣.

解答 During the weekend I traveled by the air for the first time in my life.I usual travel by train or bus.It's both cheaper and safe.But to fly in the sky was something new to me.At the end I felt a little nervous.But very soon I became exciting when I found me high up in the sky among the clouds.I also found that mountains,fields,river and so on was interestingly small.I enjoy the frightening and comfortable journey very much.After all,it is more interesting∧take a plane than to take a car.
詳解:
1.去掉the 考查固定搭配.by air意為"乘飛機(jī)",是固定搭配.
2.usual改為usually 考查副詞.travel是動(dòng)詞,要用副詞修飾,形容詞usual的副詞是usually.
3.safe改為safer 考查形容詞比較級(jí).a(chǎn)nd是并列連詞,它前后連接兩個(gè)相同的語法成分,cheap與safe并列,都要用形容詞比較級(jí).
4.end改為beginning/start 考查名詞詞義.根據(jù)語境,應(yīng)是"剛開始我有點(diǎn)緊張".
5.exciting改為excited 考查過去分詞.過去分詞作表語表示人物所處心理狀態(tài)或情感變化. 
6.me改為myself 考查代詞.根據(jù)語境,應(yīng)是"我發(fā)現(xiàn)自己在高高的天空".
7.river改為rivers 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù).river是可數(shù)名詞,要用復(fù)數(shù).
8.was改為were 考查主謂一致.主語mountains,fields,rivers是復(fù)數(shù),謂語動(dòng)詞要用復(fù)數(shù)were.
9.enjoy改為enjoyed  考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài).全文都是講述過去的事情,要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài).
10.加to 考查動(dòng)詞不定式.it作形式主語,真正的主語是后面的動(dòng)詞不定式短語to  take a plane than to take a car.

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說明文,短文故事,書信等,具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性.短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際,從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作.首先,通讀全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯,在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好,再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò).其次,要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò).這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意.最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍,檢查答案是否正確,感覺是否還有不妥之處,最終形成定稿.

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