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在生活中有人喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，也有人不太運(yùn)動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以“Is sport really good for us?”為題，按照下列要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文：
1.有人認(rèn)為運(yùn)動(dòng)能強(qiáng)身健體，陶冶情操（如培養(yǎng)合作精神等）但也有人認(rèn)為運(yùn)動(dòng)并非是強(qiáng)身健體的唯一形式（如飲食也很重要）；運(yùn)動(dòng)容易造成傷害，挫折等
2.你的看法及理由
注意：詞數(shù)：100-120 文章題目和開頭已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。
Is sport really good for us?
Some think sport does us good in many ways.                     ____________
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Answer 1

Some think sport does us good in many ways. Not only does sport help people to stay fit and healthy, but the competition and teamwork in sport give people a lot of motivation to keep going .  However , 0thers believe that sport is not the only way to do this. Eating well is a big part of a healthy life. On the other hand, sport can actually be dangerous. Millions of people are hurt playing sport each year.
From my perspective , sport teaches us big lessons for life. Most sports involve teamwork and teach us how to get along with others, how to work together to achieve a common goal, and about trust and responsibility. Truly, some sports do not suit some people, but there are so many possible choices that everyone can find a sport to enjoy.

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文，主題是“Is sport really good for us?”，給出了大部分要點(diǎn)，還要考生給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，先是運(yùn)動(dòng)的好處；，然后指出過度運(yùn)動(dòng)的壞處；最后是自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求考生用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求觀點(diǎn)明確，駕馭語(yǔ)言的能力強(qiáng)，選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于正反方觀點(diǎn)作文，但是要點(diǎn)給出的不算多，需要考生自己添加部分。在分析部分已經(jīng)詳細(xì)說(shuō)明了。在寫作的時(shí)候要適合合適的連接詞來(lái)連接各要點(diǎn)，使他們成為整體。要選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和句型，讓文章有變化，有層次。