Question

【題目】假如你叫李華，你的美國筆友Tom來信詢問你 “十一”假期將要怎么過。請根據(jù)以下信息給他回信，談談你在“十一”假期中的活動的安排。

內容要點：

1.休息（由于平時學習緊張，缺少鍛煉和休息）

2.看望鄉(xiāng)下的祖父母（幫助他們做點家務，并跟他們談談身邊的新鮮事）

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100個左右；可適當增加細節(jié)

2.開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3.詞匯 國慶假期：National Day Holiday

Dear Tom,

I’m very glad to receive your letter. And it’s a pleasure to tell you something about ____________________________________________________________________________________________

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____________________________________________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I'm very glad to receive your letter. And it's a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the National Day holiday.

First, I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise. Of course, it took me two days to stay with my grandparents living in the countryside and help them do some housework and tell them what happened to me and my friends. What’s more, I had a trip with my friends to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathe fresh air.

What did you do during your holiday? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本題考查提綱類作文。首先審題，假如你叫李華，你的美國筆友Tom來信詢問你 “十一”假期將要怎么過。請根據(jù)以下信息給他回信，談談你在“十一”假期中的活動的安排。

內容要點：1.休息（由于平時學習緊張，缺少鍛煉和休息）。2.看望鄉(xiāng)下的祖父母（幫助他們做點家務，并跟他們談談身邊的新鮮事）。其次要確定時態(tài)，發(fā)生在過去的事情，用一般過去時。在寫作過程中，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合題目所給出的信息，不要出現(xiàn)偏題問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有文采。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些高級句型。例如And it's a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the National Day holiday.這里含有一個賓語從句。Of course, it took me two days to stay with my grandparents living in the countryside and help them do some housework and tell them what happened to me and my friends.這里含有一個賓語從句。