Question

4．假定你是李華．在一個(gè)英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)論壇上，你看到一個(gè)名叫Grown-up的中學(xué)生發(fā)帖（post）尋求幫助，請(qǐng)根據(jù)帖子內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和要求回貼．
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1 告訴Grown-up要理解母親；
2 給Grown-up提出解決問(wèn)題的具體建議．
要求：
1 短文需寫(xiě)在答題卡的指定區(qū)域．
2短文詞數(shù)不少于80（不含已寫(xiě)好的部分）．
3內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)意連貫．
4書(shū)寫(xiě)須清晰、工整．
Hi，Grown-up，
As a student of your age，I understand your situation．The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers．However，it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings．Here are a few suggestions．
First，it's advisable to talk more with your mom．Heart to heart talks help you understand each other better．They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes toward many things．
Second，you should learn to do your own things well，proving to your mom that you are already a"Grown-up"．It's even better if you could share more of the housework，such as cleaning，washing and cooking．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封回帖，根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一和第二人稱(chēng)展開(kāi)敘述，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主．內(nèi)容主要包括：一告訴Grown-up要理解母親；二給Grown-up提出解決問(wèn)題的具體建議；三表達(dá)祝愿．
高分句型：
1．The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers．
句子里you are facing 是The problem 的定語(yǔ)從句．
你面對(duì)的問(wèn)題在我們青少年里是很常見(jiàn)的．
2．Second，you should learn to do your own things well，proving to your mom that you are already a"Grown-up"．
句子里proving to your mom 是結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)，prove和主語(yǔ)you是主動(dòng)關(guān)系．that you are already a"Grown-up"．
是prove的賓語(yǔ)從句．
第二，你應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)自己把事情做好，向你的媽媽證明你已經(jīng)是一個(gè)成年人了．

解答 Hi，Grown-up，
     As a student of your age，I understand your situation．The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers．【高分句型一】However，it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings．Here are a few suggestions．（告訴Grown-up要理解母親）
    First，it's advisable to talk more with your mom．Heart to heart talks help you understand each other better．They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes toward many things．Second，you should learn to do your own things well，proving to your mom that you are already a"Grown-up"．【高分句型二】It's even better if you could share more of the housework，such as cleaning，washing and cooking．（給Grown-up提出解決問(wèn)題的具體建議）
    Hope these tips are helpful to you and can get along well with your mother．（表達(dá)祝愿）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類(lèi)作文．
提綱類(lèi)作文，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，重點(diǎn)在于運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出．難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞和從句．