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18．假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)高三3班的班長(zhǎng)李華．下個(gè)月，你們學(xué)校將舉行一次籃球賽，要求各班組隊(duì)參加；每隊(duì)?wèi)?yīng)由一名老師和四名學(xué)生組成．你和同學(xué)們商量，決定邀請(qǐng)你們的外籍教師Tom參加．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給Tom寫一封電子郵件：
1．向Tom發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)；
2．給Tom介紹籃球賽的組隊(duì)要求；
3．告訴Tom你們賽前的訓(xùn)練打算．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120-150；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)（用于表達(dá)要求）和一般將來時(shí)（表達(dá)訓(xùn)練安排）．內(nèi)容包括四部分：一自我介紹并發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)；二 介紹籃球賽的組隊(duì)要求；三 賽前的訓(xùn)練打算；四 再次邀請(qǐng)．
高分句型：
1．What（引導(dǎo)主語從句，做從句的主語） is special about it is that （引導(dǎo)表語從句）the team has to include a teacher as a player．
特別的要求是每隊(duì)必須包括一位老師做球員．
It will be guided by our physical education teacher，Mr．Wang（our physical education teacher的同位語），who（引導(dǎo)定語從句，代指Mr．Wang） is expert at playing basketball．
由我們的體育老師，王老師來指導(dǎo)，他是籃球方面的專家．

解答 Dear Tom，
How are you？I am Li Hua，monitor of Class 3．I am writing to invite you to take part in the basketball game to be held next month at our school（自我介紹并發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)）．
The game，according to the school，is part of activities to celebrate our school's 110 years anniversary．Each class is required to form a team to participate in it．What is special about it is that the team has to include a teacher as a player（高分句型一）．It immediately occurred to us that you are the appropriate teacher we feel like playing with．Therefore，I'd like to invite you to take part in the game on behalf of our class（介紹籃球賽的組隊(duì)要求）．
What's more，we have made a plan to do some training on the playground from tomorrow on．It will be guided by our physical education teacher，Mr．Wang，who is expert at playing basketball（高分句型二）．The training，which will go on from 4：00 to 6：00 every afternoon，is intended to improve our strength and playing skills．Please come to join us．（賽前的訓(xùn)練打算）
Don't hesitate to accept our invitation．Thank you!（再次邀請(qǐng)）
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) it做形式主語或賓語是高中比較常見的句式，平時(shí)可以多加練習(xí)，例如本文中的
It immediately occurred to us that you are the appropriate teacher we feel like playing with．it代指that you are the appropriate teacher we feel like playing with；
又如It is important to read aloud when learning English．