【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：

1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I used to be very addicted to computer games that I had little time to study and thus fall behind. My parents were great worried about me. It was what my English teacher said helped me out. She told me must have my own goal of life, otherwise your future would be hopeless. She said computer games were great fun and they would not guarantee for me a bright future. Finally, I realized I must set up a goal and fight for them. From then on, whenever I have an urge to playing computer games, I would think of my goal and regain my strength immediately.

【答案】1. very→so

2. fall→fell

3. great→ greatly

4. helped前面加that

5. your→my

6. and→but

7.去掉for

8. them→it

9. playing→play

10. would→will

【解析】

本文為記敘文。作者講述了自己曾經(jīng)沉迷電腦游戲，以至于成績(jī)落后，現(xiàn)在開(kāi)始努力戒除游戲，向著自己的目標(biāo)不斷努力。

第一處：考查結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句。句意：我過(guò)去太沉迷于電腦游戲了，以至于沒(méi)有時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)。此處為so…that…句型，“如此……以至于……”。故very改成so。

第二處：考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知，此處描述的是過(guò)去的事情，應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。故fall改成fell。

第三處：考查副詞。此處修飾形容詞worried，應(yīng)使用副詞。故great改成greatly。

第四處：考查強(qiáng)調(diào)句。句意：是我的英語(yǔ)老師說(shuō)的話(huà)幫助了我。此處為強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，what my English teacher said是被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分。故helped前面加that。

第五處：考查代詞。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境，此處指“否則我的未來(lái)會(huì)是沒(méi)有希望的”。故your改成my。

第六處：考查連詞。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境，前后句意存在轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，意為“她說(shuō)電腦游戲很有趣，但它們不能保證我有一個(gè)光明的未來(lái)”。故and改成but。

第七處：考查動(dòng)詞詞性。guarantee是及物動(dòng)詞，介詞for多余。故去掉for。

第八處：考查代詞。此處指代and前的a goal，應(yīng)使用單數(shù)形式。故them改成it。

第九處：考查不定式。句意：每當(dāng)我有玩電腦游戲的沖動(dòng)。此處指“去玩游戲的沖動(dòng)”，應(yīng)使用不定式做定語(yǔ)。故playing改成play。

第十處：考查情態(tài)動(dòng)詞。句意：從那時(shí)起，每當(dāng)我有玩電腦游戲的沖動(dòng)，一想到我的目標(biāo)，我就會(huì)立刻恢復(fù)力量。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知，此處應(yīng)使用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞will的一般時(shí)態(tài)。故would改成will。

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