假設(shè)你是李華,看到某中學(xué)生報(bào)的"熱點(diǎn)話題"專欄討論的主題是"對(duì)待父母的過(guò)度呵護(hù)我們應(yīng)該怎么辦",請(qǐng)你就此話題發(fā)表一下自己的觀點(diǎn)．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給該專欄的編輯寫一封信,發(fā)表你的個(gè)人意見(jiàn)．

寫作要點(diǎn): 1．非常感激父母對(duì)我的愛(ài)；2．與父母交流自己的真實(shí)感受:自己長(zhǎng)大了,能處理自己的事情；3．相信父母會(huì)更理智地愛(ài)我．

注意:1．信的開(kāi)頭已給出,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 2．詞數(shù):110左右．

Dear Editor,

As is known, all the parents love their children．

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Dear Editor,

As is known, all the parents love their children．So it is with my parents．I really feel lucky that I have such kind parents．And I deeply appreciate their love for me．

However, I have to admit sometimes they show me so much love that I feel uneasy with them．I think I am old enough to handle my personal affairs．At this time instead of refusing their help rudely, I’d like to talk with them openly and politely．I will tell them I am old enough to deal with some of my own matters on my own．I’ll let them know what I need is their belief in me and their support．I believe my parents will finally understand me．

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析： 英語(yǔ)提綱式作文為考生提供了題目與一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的寫作提綱，將考生的寫作控制在一定范疇。它要求考生緊扣題目主題，并根據(jù)提綱提示的思路和要點(diǎn)展開(kāi)段落。這實(shí)際上是對(duì)考生思路和文章寫作范圍所作的明確限定。因此，提綱中所列舉的要點(diǎn)要全部涉及到，一個(gè)也不能遺漏。同時(shí)，為了提高文章檔次，考生應(yīng)在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全的同時(shí)進(jìn)行合理而又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮。因此，該類型的書(shū)面表達(dá)具有一定的靈活性，能較好地體現(xiàn)考生的英語(yǔ)思維能力�？忌�需要注意句子間的正確聯(lián)系，注意詞語(yǔ)的豐富和句型的多樣。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本篇習(xí)作第一段就點(diǎn)明第一個(gè)要點(diǎn)，對(duì)父母的愛(ài)充滿感激，直奔主題。第二段開(kāi)始用了一個(gè)however，直接把筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，說(shuō)明父母盲目的愛(ài)已經(jīng)對(duì)我有所困擾。同時(shí)，使用這么一句話At this time instead of refusing their help rudely, I’d like to talk with them openly and politely．表明自己目前的真實(shí)感受。最后，I believe my parents will finally understand me．表明作者對(duì)父母的愛(ài)、信任和期待。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱作文

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