Question

9．某中學(xué)英文報(bào)近期開(kāi)辟專(zhuān)欄，討論課堂紀(jì)律的問(wèn)題，請(qǐng)結(jié)合自身的實(shí)際，按以下提示，用英文給該專(zhuān)欄寫(xiě)一篇稿件．
     1、列舉兩種或以上違反課堂紀(jì)律的情形；
     2、指出其危害；
     3、提出解決紀(jì)律問(wèn)題的措施（包括老師和學(xué)生）
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：120左右；開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)．
     Good class discipline ensures that every student learns well in class．However，very often we notice students disobey rules．Occasionally some students eat snacks while listening to the teacher，or when tired，they fall asleep in class．What's worse，some students even talk loudly with others，making it difficult for the students to hear the teacher clearly．
Listening to the teacher attentively in class is the major way we gain knowledge．If we do not focus our attention and take careful notes，we may miss many important points，or worse still，we may not be able to understand at all．A noisy class is just an unacceptable mess．
To solve the problem，I think the teacher should first shoulder the responsibility and be strict with everyone．Also，students are supposed to realize the importance of good discipline．Whoever breaks a rule in class should be punished．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇稿件，結(jié)合自身的實(shí)際闡述課堂紀(jì)律的問(wèn)題．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．列舉兩種或以上違反課堂紀(jì)律的情形；2．指出其危害；3．提出解決紀(jì)律問(wèn)題的措施（包括老師和學(xué)生）．屬提綱作文．在寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)為主．時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．重要短語(yǔ)：fall asleep （睡覺(jué)…），listen to the teacher （聽(tīng)老師上課…），focus one's attention （集中注意力），shoulder the responsibility（承擔(dān)責(zé)任），be strict with sb（對(duì)…嚴(yán)格），be supposed to do…（應(yīng)該做某事）．

解答 Good class discipline ensures that every student learns well in class． However，very often we notice students disobey rules．Occasionally some students eat snacks while listening to the teacher，or when tired，they fall asleep in class．What's worse，some students even talk loudly with others，making it difficult for the students to hear the teacher clearly．【高分句型】（列舉兩種或以上違反課堂紀(jì)律的情形）
Listening to the teacher attentively in class is the major way we gain knowledge．【高分句型】If we do not focus our attention and take careful notes，we may miss many important points，or worse still，we may not be able to understand at all．A noisy class is just an unacceptable mess．（指出其危害）
To solve the problem，I think the teacher should first shoulder the responsibility and be strict with everyone．Also，students are supposed to realize the importance of good discipline．Whoever breaks a rule in class should be punished．【高分句型】（提出解決紀(jì)律問(wèn)題的措施）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．