Question

10．請(qǐng)以"How to stay healthy"為題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，內(nèi)容必須包括以下要點(diǎn)：
  1．健康的飲食    2．適當(dāng)?shù)腻憻?nbsp;   3．平和的心態(tài)
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；     2．可以適當(dāng)?shù)脑黾蛹?xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇讀寫任務(wù)作文，根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，以"How to stay healthy"寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)以第一人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．寫作要點(diǎn)必須包括：1．健康的飲食；2．適當(dāng)?shù)腻憻挘?．平和的心態(tài)．
重要短語(yǔ)：
 the importance of （..的重要性）  first of all（首先）  body-building（健身）  deal with（處理）  play an important role（起重要作用）  
高分句型：
1．They will enable us to become energetic to deal with our daily work．Also，enough sleep plays an important role．該句靈活運(yùn)用了許多短語(yǔ)及高級(jí)詞匯，如enable sb to do，deal with等．
2．Only after we have got a sound sleep can we get refreshed．該句為倒裝句．
3．More importantly，if you want to stay healthy，you'd better stay peaceful most of your time even if you are faced with troubles or difficulties．

解答 Everyone knows the importance of staying healthy．The problem is how we can stay healthy．（點(diǎn)明主題）
  First of all，a balanced diet does benefit us much．We have to eat enough body-building and energy-giving foods，such us vegetables，meat，eggs and so on．They will enable us to become energetic to deal with our daily work．Also，enough sleep plays an important role．（高分句型1）Only after we have got a sound sleep can we get refreshed．（高分句型2）Besides，we have to take regular exercise，such us ball games，swimming or running．These sports are the key to keeping fit．More importantly，if you want to stay healthy，you'd better stay peaceful most of your time even if you are faced with troubles or difficulties．（高分句型3）A good mood will help you be a wise person and then get your problems solved．（保持健康的詳細(xì)方法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 讀寫任務(wù)類在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需要積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．