【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加: 在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線\劃掉。

修改: 在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意: 1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分

Dear Peter,

From your letter I have known that you and your family plans to go to the Disneyland in Shanghai. I am willing to tell you something about it.

The Disneyland was open to the public on June 16, 2016, where you can enjoyed a magical world. As for the ticket, the price for an adult is 370 yuan per person, while a child under 7 only needs to pay for 185 yuan. Besides, I have some advices for you. Consider the food in the park is extreme expensive, you should take some snacks and water. On addition, you are supposed to wear sports shoes, that can make your visit more enjoyable.

Wish you happy visit. If you had any question, don’t hesitate to turn to me.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【答案】1. plans→plan

2. enjoyed→enjoy

3. pay for 中for刪除

4. advices→advice

5. Consider→Considering

6. extreme→extremely

7. On→In

8. that→which

9. happy visit前加a

10. had→have

【解析】

這是李華寫給彼得的一封信。在信中，李華得知彼得和他的家人將要去上海的迪士尼樂園玩，李華為彼得詳細介紹了旅游攻略。

第一處：考查主謂一致。主語“你和你的家人”是復數(shù)，謂語動詞不用第三人稱單數(shù)，所以plans改為plan。

第二處：考查情態(tài)動詞。can是一個情態(tài)動詞，情態(tài)動詞后，用動詞原形，所以enjoyed改為enjoy。

第三處：考查動詞的用法。pay用作及物動詞時，意思是“支付”，賓語可以是“人”、“錢”；pay for中的pay為不及物動詞，其賓語多為物，即pay for sth.，意為“付款買某物”，其賓語為人時，即pay for sb.，意為“替某人付款。”題干中意思是“一個七歲以下的孩子僅需要支付185元”，所以pay for 中for刪除。

第四處：考查名詞單復數(shù)。句意：此外，我還有一些建議給你。advice是不可數(shù)名詞，所以advices改為advice。

第五處：考查非謂語動詞。Consider的邏輯主語是you，它們之間是主動關系，所以用現(xiàn)在分詞作原因狀語，Consider改為Considering。

第六處：考查副詞。expensive是一個形容詞，需要用副詞修飾形容詞，所以extreme改為extremely。

第七處：考查固定短語。句意：此外，你應該穿運動鞋，這會使得你的旅行更加愉快。in addition此外，該短語是固定短語，所以On改為In。

第八處：考查定語從句。which can make your visit more enjoyable.作定語，修飾整個句子，所以which can make your visit more enjoyable.是一個定語從句，關系詞在從句中作主語，指代整個主句內容，只能用which，所以that改為which。

第九處：考查冠詞。句意：祝你有一次快樂的旅行。題干中泛指“一次快樂的旅行”，happy的首字母發(fā)音是輔音，用不定冠詞a，所以happy visit前加a。

第十處：考查時態(tài)。if引導的條件狀語從句，主句是一般將來時態(tài)、祈使句或情態(tài)動詞，從句要用現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，所以had改為have。

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