分析 本篇書面表達屬于書信類寫作,根據(jù)提示信息和題目要求來展開.寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確有哪些要點.2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài).寫作書信時一定要注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)和層次,提出建議時要具有說服力,對于一些常用的動詞,要注意其其他形式以更為簡練的表達自己的觀點,要靈活運用各種短語和從句來豐富文章的內(nèi)容.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu).比如 With the coming of the International Trade Exposition,I'd like to be a volunteer very much是with引導(dǎo)的伴隨狀語從句.Besides,I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history,so I will be not only a servant but also a carrier for our splendid culture使用了not only…but also的句型.I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one.是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句.此外,文章還使用了大量短語 serve with enthusiasm,a carrier for our splendid culture,play an important role,express myself fluently and clearly等.插入語Above all,Besides,What's more,To sum up的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感,也使語言更加連貫.
With the coming of the International Trade Exposition,I'd like to be a volunteer very much.(高分句型一)
Above all,I promise I should endeavor to serve with enthusiasm our distinguished guests from all over the world.(高分句型二)
What's more,as we all know,English as an international language,will play an important role in communication during the Exposition,and I am good at it.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for taking your time to read my letter.With the coming of the International Trade Exposition,I'd like to be a volunteer very much.(高分句型一)
All our citizens are hosts for this special event.Above all,I promise I should endeavor to serve with enthusiasm our distinguished guests from all over the world.(高分句型二)Besides,I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history,so I will be not only a servant but also a carrier for our splendid culture.What's more,as we all know,English as an international language,will play an important role in communication during the Exposition,and I am good at it.(高分句型三)I can express myself fluently and clearly in English.
To sum up,I believe I can be a qualified volunteer.I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one.
Yours,
Li Hua
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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