Question

6．母親節(jié)快到了，學校將組織一次英語演講比賽，請根據(jù)以下要點以"Mother's Day"為題寫一篇英語演講稿．
要點：
1．母親節(jié)：
1）起源于：古希臘
2）時間：在5月的第二個星期日
3）目的：感謝她們的辛勤勞動；使母親愉快地過節(jié)
4）活動：母親盛裝打扮；孩子們贈送禮物；對母親說："我愛你!"
5）母親的反應：感到自豪、滿足．
2．你對母親節(jié)的看法．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100-120左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)
2．詞匯：古希臘（ancient Greece）
Good morning everybody!It's my honor to stand here and make a speech about"Mother's Day"．
                                                    
That's all．Thank you for your listening．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇演講稿，要求根據(jù)所給的提示內(nèi)容寫一則演講稿．注意以下幾點：1．演講稿的格式，稱呼、結(jié)語；2．仔細閱讀題目，不要漏掉題中要點，注意要提到自己的看法．3．運用多種句型，適當運用一些高級詞匯，給文章增色．
【亮點說明】文章恰當?shù)倪\用了演講稿的格式，要點齊全，層次分明，條理清晰．運用了多種句式，如It is an international festival which is celebrated on the second Sunday of May．是定語從句，詞匯豐富多變，如has its origin in起源于，try their best to 盡力，dress up盛裝打扮，As far as I'm concerned我認為等，使得文章讓人眼前一亮．

解答 Good morning everybody!It's my honor to stand here and make a speech about"Mother's Day"．
Mother's Day has its origin in ancient Greece．It is an international festival which is celebrated on the second Sunday of May．（高分句型）In order to thank them for their years'of hard work，people always try their best to make their mothers spend the festival happily．（高分句型）On the day，every mother will dress up．And children will offer gifts to their mothers，saying"I love you!"At the words，their mothers will feel very proud and satisfied．
As far as I'm concerned，it is important to celebrate Mother's Day．（高分句型）On the day，mothers will feel relaxed both mentally and physically．So the family should get together and have fun with each other．（高分句型）
That's all．Thank you for your listening．

點評 應該注意適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫，比如適當選用表示因果、遞進、轉(zhuǎn)折關系的連接詞，使文章流暢、通順，并避免因反復使用句式相同的簡單句而造成的單調(diào)感．（1）認真審題，確定體裁． （2）構思要點．根據(jù)題目要求，理解要表達的要點．設計好文章的層次段落，考慮所用時態(tài)、人稱等，把要點串聯(lián)起來，構成文章框架．（3）選詞造句，避難選易．（4）認真檢查，避免錯誤．仔細閱讀全文，查找是否有錯，注意時態(tài)、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標點是否有誤，句式是否正確．邏輯是否一致．