Question

15．請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于50
In your spoken English class，your teacher shows you the following picture．You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．

What an interesting picture!A Western young man，sitting at a table，is ready to eat a bowl of noodles．（高分句型一）He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks．He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot．At first glance，I think it's a bit funny，for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles．（高分句型二）The man in the picture is trying to copy us．Obviously he is doing itin ahard way．Maybe using one fork will do a better job，In my opinion，we don't need to copy others'ways of thinking．Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way．．

Answer 1

分析 本題為開放性圖畫作文，考生能根據(jù)相當(dāng)簡短的提示和圖畫來寫作．這種形式為張揚個性提供了空間，答案不唯一，淋漓盡致地考查了學(xué)生發(fā)散思維和創(chuàng)新思維的能力，圖中描述的是一個外國人，用兩只叉子吃中式面條．反映的現(xiàn)象是當(dāng)前有些人照本宣科，不注重實踐，不能具體問題具體分析．對于考生而言，要看出這個人是卷發(fā)高鼻的外國人，要體會到西式刀叉對中式食物的矛盾性，這樣作文就不難下筆了．
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A Western young man，sitting at a table，is ready to eat a bowl of noodles．（高分句型一）句中sitting at a table，屬于現(xiàn)在分詞作定語
At first glance，I think it's a bit funny，for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles．（高分句型二）句中第一個for應(yīng)該為連詞，意為"因為"；take for granted…認(rèn)為…理所當(dāng)然  屬于固定搭配

解答 What an interesting picture!A Western young man，sitting at a table，is ready to eat a bowl of noodles．（高分句型一）He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks．He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot．At first glance，I think it's a bit funny，for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles．（高分句型二）The man in the picture is trying to copy us．Obviously he is doing it in a hard way．Maybe using one fork will do a better job，In my opinion，we don't need to copy others'ways of thinking．Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．