Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。作文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏子符號（∧）并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Boys and girls! I’d like to share my swimming experience with you. My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There was a time when I swim like a rock. This went on till one day when I was fishing with a friend of mine at the pond. I slipped into it. Had my friend not come to my rescue, I would have drowned. Since then, I had come to know the important of learning to swim. I didn’t attend at any training class but learned it all by myself. Strange to say, I have no difficult swimming at all now. Though the way I swim looks awkward (笨拙的), at least it can keep me floating. Think of this, I feel quite satisfying.

Yours,

Zhang Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】extreme→extremely

【2】swim→swam

【3】the→a

【4】have ∧ drowned.加been

【5】had→have

【6】important→importance

【7】去掉at

【8】difficult→difficulty

【9】Think→Thinking

【10】satisfying→satisfied

【解析】

試題分析：作者的一次游泳經(jīng)歷。

【1】extreme→extremely 副詞修飾形容詞，故把extreme改為extremely。

【2】swim→swam 根據(jù)句意可知，用一般過去時態(tài)，故把swim改為swam。

【3】the→a 句意：在一個池塘遇到我的一個朋友。故把the改為a。

【4】have ∧ drowned.加been 句意：我將會被淹死。此處是被動語態(tài)，故在have 和drowned之間加been。

【5】had→have 根據(jù)Since then（自從那時起……），可知句子用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)，故把had改為have。

【6】important→importance 表示“學游泳的重要性”，此處用名詞形式作動詞的賓語，故把important改為importance。

【7】去掉at attend是及物動詞，后面直接跟賓語，故去掉at。

【8】difficult→difficulty have no difficulty (in) doing sth.在做某事上有困難。故把difficult改為difficulty。

【9】Think→Thinking 句意：我考慮到這個，我感到滿意。Think與主語I是主動關系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞作時間狀語，故把Think改為Thinking。

【10】satisfying→satisfied 修飾人用-ed形式的形容詞，故把 satisfying改為satisfied。

【知識歸納】

1.以e結(jié)尾的形容詞變成副詞時，有的直接加ly ;有的把e去掉再加ly.

possible---possibly； simple---simply; gentle---gently; terrible---terribly; true---truly; flexible---flexibly

immediate--- immediately; brave---bravely; wise---wisely；active---actively

2. 介詞后面用動名詞做賓語He left home without telling his parents.他沒告訴他的父母就離開了家。

溫馨提示：be busy with sth.忙于某事/be busy doing sth.忙于做某事；spend---on sth. 在某事上花費---/spend---(in) doing sth.在做某事上花費---；have difficulty(trouble/problems) with sth.在某事上有困難/ have difficulty(trouble/problems) (in) doing sth.在做某事上有困難。