【題目】 短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加: 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào) (∧), 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線 ( \ ) 劃掉。

修改: 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意: 1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

There is no doubt whether the Internet plays an important part in our everyday life. It can provide people with a life of highly quality. So it can also do harm to people, especially to teenagers. For an example, things such as violence and cheating often appear on the Internet, that can seriously pollute their hearts and souls (心靈). As result, children will gradually lose interest for their studies. Now it’s time for the government to take some measures (措施) to deal of this problem. Some websites that breaks the rules should be punished and closed up. As students, we should also protect us from the bad influence of the Internet.

【答案】

【1】第一句 whether→that;

【2】第二句 highly→high;

【3】第三句 So→But

【4】第四句 去掉example前的冠詞an;

【5】that改為 which

【6】第五句 As 和result之間加a;

【7】interest后 for改為in

【8】第六句 of→with;

【9】第七句 breaks→break;

【10】第八句 us→ourselves

【解析】

試題分析:本文屬于議論文,講述了因特網(wǎng)的巨大作用,同時(shí)也說明了因特網(wǎng)可能會(huì)對(duì)人產(chǎn)生負(fù)面的影響。號(hào)召我們采取措施解決這個(gè)問題。

【1】第一句 whether→that; 考查同位語(yǔ)從句。固定句式There is no doubt that...毫無(wú)疑問...;本句中的同位語(yǔ)從句表示的是確定的事實(shí),所以使用that引導(dǎo)。

【2】第二句 highly→high; 考查形容詞。本句中形容詞high做定語(yǔ)修飾名詞quality,在英語(yǔ)中副詞通常不能做定語(yǔ),只能做狀語(yǔ)。

【3】第三句 So→But 考查連詞。句意:因特網(wǎng)可以給人們提供高質(zhì)量的生活,但是它也會(huì)傷害到人們,尤其是年輕人。根據(jù)句意可知上下文之間存在轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,所以使用but表示轉(zhuǎn)折。

【4】第四句 去掉example前的冠詞an;考查固定搭配。短語(yǔ)for example例如,原文轉(zhuǎn)換的冠詞an是多余的。

【5】that改為 which考查非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,關(guān)系代詞that是不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的,本句中關(guān)系代詞which指代先行詞things such as violence and cheating在句中作主語(yǔ)。

【6】第五句 As 和result之間加a;考查固定搭配。短語(yǔ)as a result結(jié)果是,表示結(jié)果。原文中的不定冠詞a是多余的。

【7】interest后 for改為in考查介詞搭配。名詞interest興趣,其形容詞interested通常都和介詞in連用,表示感興趣的具體方面。

【8】第六句 of→with; 考查固定搭配。短語(yǔ)deal with處理,對(duì)付。句意:是政府采取措施處理這些問題的時(shí)候了。

【9】第七句 breaks→break; 考查主謂一致。本句定語(yǔ)從句的先行詞是some websites,關(guān)系代詞that指代先行詞在句中作主語(yǔ),謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使用復(fù)數(shù)形式break。

【10】第八句 us→ourselves 考查反身代詞。本句中使用反身代詞ourselves做動(dòng)詞protect的賓語(yǔ),表示強(qiáng)調(diào)。句意:作為學(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)自己不受因特網(wǎng)負(fù)面作用的影響。

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