Question

16．假定你是李華，最近，你校正在舉辦以"和諧校園"為主題的英語文化節(jié)．為此，你們班將組織一次主題文化會，那么我們該如何做呢？請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談談你對創(chuàng)建和諧校園的一些想法，內容包括"與人相處"和"校園環(huán)境"兩個方面，每個方面至少應提出2條建議．
注意：1．詞數不少于120詞，開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數．
2．短文內容需適當發(fā)揮，使行文連貫．
3．參考詞匯：和諧 harmony； 和諧的harmonious
Dear fellow students，
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 Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
Our school is aiming at building a harmonious school．I think it is everyone's duty to work hard to achieve this goal．
我們學校的目標是建設和諧學校．我認為努力實現這一目標是每個人的職責．
高分句型二：
At the same time，we should communicate with our parents regularly so that they can know what is happening in our school and what is in our mind．
同時，我們應該經常與父母溝通，這樣他們就可以知道我們學校發(fā)生了什么，我們心里想的是什么．

解答 Dear fellow students，
Our school is aiming at building a harmonious school．I think it is everyone's duty to work hard to achieve this goal（高分句型一）．What should we do now？
First of all，we should be friendly to our classmates and try our best to help each other．Secondly，we should respect and trust our teachers and develop a pleasant relationship with them．At the same time，we should communicate with our parents regularly so that they can know what is happening in our school and what is in our mind（高分句型二）．Thirdly，I think，we should protect our environment and keep our school yard clean．We should take care of the equipment in the classroom and the plants in the school yard．Don't spit and throw rubbish everywhere．
Let's take action from now on．Let's work together to live in harmony．
Thank you．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．