Question

13．假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Steven 即將來(lái)北京學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)，發(fā)郵件請(qǐng)你給他介紹一本學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)的書，你覺(jué)得網(wǎng)上熱銷的《漢語(yǔ)會(huì)話常用語(yǔ)》《Expressions in Chinese Conversation》適合他．請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，并增加必要信息，給他回復(fù)郵件．

定價(jià)	內(nèi)容	形式	如何得到
15元	準(zhǔn)確、豐富，適合初學(xué)者	配有磁帶，適合自學(xué)	（自擬）

詞數(shù)：120-150；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Steven，
                                                                                     
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封回信，第一段問(wèn)候之后，第二段就要解答對(duì)方的問(wèn)題，這里是要詢問(wèn)適合學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的書，文章里應(yīng)該有建議和建議的理由．There are many books intended for foreigners who learn Chinese，of which I think Expressions in Chinese Conversation is a better choice．這句話里很恰當(dāng)?shù)挠靡痪浞窍拗菩远ㄕZ(yǔ)從句，這段里共給了四個(gè)理由，值得注意的是在四個(gè)理由鏈接的時(shí)候，作者用了：besides，what's more使得句與句很連貫．文章第三段里給出購(gòu)買的方式和途徑，并提供必要的幫助．
文章在遣詞造句方面也動(dòng)了腦筋，用了一些高級(jí)詞匯和短語(yǔ)，如：are satisfied with、accurate language and abundant contents、is quite suitable for、it's convenient for you to learn、if you have any difficulty in finding the book這些短語(yǔ)的使用都體現(xiàn)作者熟練使用所學(xué)知識(shí)的能力．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：
There are many books intended for foreigners who learn Chinese，of which I think Expressions in Chinese Conversation is a better choice．（高分句型一）
What's more，it's convenient for you to learn by yourself with the tape contained in it．（高分句型二）
Please contact me if you have any difficulty in finding the book．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Steven，
      I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Beijing to learn Chinese．
      There are many books intended for foreigners who learn Chinese，of which I think Expressions in Chinese Conversation is a better choice．（高分句型一）This book has been a best seller on the Internet in recent years．Most readers are satisfied with its accurate language and abundant contents．Besides，the book is quite suitable for beginners because it starts from the very beginning．What's more，it's convenient for you to learn by yourself with the tape contained in it．（高分句型二）
      If you're interested in it，you can buy it via the Internet for 15 yuan．It's also available in local bookstores in Beijing．Please contact me if you have any difficulty in finding the book．（高分句型三）
     Wish you a nice time in China．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．