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【題目】假設(shè)你是Tom，你的美國筆友Mike來信說他父母因?yàn)楣ぷ髟�因，全家搬到了一個(gè)新城市。他現(xiàn)在每天除了上課就是在家上網(wǎng)，幾乎沒有朋友，感覺很孤獨(dú)。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封信，勸他別封閉自己，多結(jié)交朋友，參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)（social activities）等。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100字左右。（開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。使行文連貫。

Dear Mike,

I know it’s hard to start a new life in a strange city. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

I know it’s hard to start a new life in a strange city. However, just staying at home doing nothing but surf the Internet is not good for you. You’d better go out and join in some social activities, such as playing sports, going camping and so on. By doing this, you can get to know more people around. And it would be a good idea to help others if possible and show them you are open and friendly as well. With time going on, people will know you better and like to make friends with you, so you won’t feel lonely anymore.

Hope things will turn better for you.

Yours

Tom

【解析】本文是一篇郵件類作文。本文要求考生以Tom的名義給美國筆友Mike寫一封信，勸他別封閉自己，多結(jié)交朋友，參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)（social activities）等�？忌�在成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意：合理發(fā)揮想象力，使文章的表達(dá)自然，豐滿。文章的寫作要點(diǎn)要齊全：（1）. 勸他別封閉自己，并注意說明封閉自己的壞處；（2）. 多結(jié)交朋友，最好說一下如何結(jié)交朋友；（3）. 參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)，并說明參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)的好處。注意文章的人稱：以第二人稱為主。時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句型，以提高文章的檔次；恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞、插入語，使文章表達(dá)自然，流暢。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

本文詳略得當(dāng)，運(yùn)用了高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句式。如高級(jí)詞匯：had better，By doing，With time going on。高級(jí)句式：①staying at home doing nothing but surf the Internet is not good for you.非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)；②And it would be a good idea to help others if possible and show them you are open and friendly as well. 運(yùn)用了it be+名詞 to do結(jié)構(gòu)。