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【題目】近日，溫州某中學(xué)發(fā)放800萬獎學(xué)金獎勵高分新生，鼓勵更多優(yōu)秀學(xué)生進(jìn)入該校學(xué)習(xí)。此事在你校學(xué)生中引起廣泛討論。請你結(jié)合下表用英語寫一篇150詞左右的短文。

	30%的學(xué)生贊成	70%的學(xué)生不贊成	你的觀點(diǎn)
理由	1．激發(fā)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)熱情； 2．有助學(xué)校提高名聲；	1．金錢不是學(xué)習(xí)目的； 2．容易誘導(dǎo)學(xué)生作弊；	1．…… 2．……

注意：

1）作文應(yīng)涵蓋的所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意銜接與連貫；

2）詞數(shù)150詞左右。開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3）作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

Recently, a high school in Yangzhou, Jiangsu province has given out 5 million RMB to award high-scoring students.__________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently, a high school in Wenzhou, Zhejiang province has given out 8 million RMB to award high-scoring students.Opinions differ on this topic.

30% of the students are in favor of it, holding the view that this action can inspire students’ enthusiasm for study. Becoming top students means earning more money for their families, which can improve their living conditions. Moreover, awarding students money can increase schools’ fame so that more top students will be attracted to study there.

However, 70% students are strongly against it. They think as high school students, they’d better focus all their energy on knowledge rather than money. What’s more, this action may lead to some students cheating in exams, which will have bad effects on their future development.

On my personal note, schools should not give students too much money as awards, which will cause students to have incorrect values. Instead, some other measures can be taken to inspire students to study harder, for example, reducing tuition fees. It is knowledge that counts.

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【解析】試題分析：

本文的寫作背景是溫州某中學(xué)發(fā)放800萬獎學(xué)金獎勵高分新生，鼓勵更多優(yōu)秀學(xué)生進(jìn)入該校學(xué)習(xí)，此事在學(xué)校引起了廣泛討論。這里要求我們寫一篇文章介紹討論結(jié)果，并說明自己對此事的看法。成文時應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全。完整敘述二個方面：我校的討論結(jié)果以及我的觀點(diǎn)（背景事件已經(jīng)給出）。 (2)人稱使用要恰當(dāng)。(3)時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時為主。(4)適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當(dāng)使用一些高級詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。根據(jù)題目的要求和我們上面提到的注意點(diǎn)，列出提綱：第一部分：寫作背景（已經(jīng)給出），引出下文；第二部分：介紹學(xué)校的討論結(jié)果（分別介紹贊成的和不贊成的原因）；第三部分：個人觀點(diǎn)（贊成和反對均可，但是須給出原因）。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

1.使用高級句型：現(xiàn)在分詞holding做伴隨狀語以及同位語從句30% of the students are in favor of it, holding the view that this action can inspire students’ enthusiasm for study.；非限制性定語從句Becoming top students means earning more money for their families, which can improve their living conditions.；On my personal note, schools should not give students too much money as awards, which will cause students to have incorrect values.；強(qiáng)調(diào)句型It is knowledge that counts.。2.使用了過渡詞語：Moreover，However，What’s more，Instead等。3.使用了重要短語：in favor of贊成；be attracted to喜愛；focus on專注于；rather than而不是；have bad effects on有負(fù)面影響。