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【題目】In the wild, lions tend to pick on the animals that are weak, old, sick or hurt. Even with the strength of their numbers they will go after the easy prey(捕獵).

The lions picked their prey of choice for this poor Gazelle. The Gazelle, surrounded by lions, looks as if she were crying when the camera closed up on her face.

The lions were faster than the Gazelle, and my goodness they were smart. When the lions got close enough to the Gazelle, even while running at speed, they would trip the running animal.

This Gazelle was moving. When pressure came from a different angle she changed directions. When she could feel the breath of the lions on her neck she changed direction. When they tried to trip her, stop her, trick her, block her, she changed direction. She ran until they stopped chasing after her. It was pointless to the lions. This Gazelle had purpose. She was running for her life.

I do not care what, who, when, where, or how often life tries to take you down a path you have not intended to go. If you feel the pressure and things are not going the way they should, change direction.

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 用約30個單詞寫出上文概要；

2. 用約120個單詞發(fā)表你的觀點，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)結(jié)合文章信息，簡要分析適時改變方向的必要性；

(2)結(jié)合實際，談?wù)勀愕睦斫夂偷玫降膯⑹尽?/span>

[寫作要求]

1. 發(fā)表觀點時必須提供理由或論據(jù)；

2. 闡述觀點或提供論據(jù)或敘述經(jīng)歷時，不能直接引用原文語句；

3. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學(xué)習(xí)名稱；

4. 不必寫標(biāo)題。

[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】What the passage conveys is that we should change direction flexibly while going through challenges and even dangers in our life, which is of significance to our development and success.

It is necessary for us to change direction at the right moment. Following the wrong path stubbornly, we may waste a lot of time and energy, with which we could otherwise achieve a lot. More importantly, we may lose some precious opportunities in life if we don’t adapt ourselves to different situations in time.

In our daily life, there are many cases like what Gazelle experienced, in which we suffer failures because we haven’t changed direction in time. For instance, if we analyze some very difficult problems from different angles in our study, we can solve them more easily. Therefore, to run for my life I will change direction when I’m stuck in the things life throws at me.

【解析】文章主要講的是自然界中獅子與瞪羚的生存狀態(tài)，瞪羚在被獅子圍追堵截時，瞪羚不斷改變自己的方向直到獅子不再追它，瞪羚在自然界的生存法則告訴了我們當(dāng)在生活中感受到壓力和事情不往正確的方向發(fā)展時，適當(dāng)改變自己的方向。

首先，同學(xué)們在概述文章的內(nèi)容時一定要做到簡潔明了符合字?jǐn)?shù)要求，要能夠突出文章內(nèi)容的中心。

第二，根據(jù)寫作內(nèi)容的要求，一定要有根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容分析適當(dāng)改變方向的必要性和結(jié)合實際談?wù)勛约旱睦斫夂蛦⑹具@兩部分的內(nèi)容。結(jié)合文章信息分析必要性時要逐點清晰地闡述，使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰內(nèi)容流暢；結(jié)合實際談自己的理解與啟示時，要適當(dāng)舉例，不能只是空虛的概括性文字。

第三，注意使用出色的短語和漂亮的句式。

第四，可借鑒范文中優(yōu)秀之處：如使用“What the passage conveys is that……”而不要總是使用the passage tells us that等十分常見而普通的句式；又如“It is necessary for us to……”的句式；范文很多地使用非限制性定語從句，使句式豐富而不單一；還有adapt to和stuck in 等優(yōu)秀的短語等等。