Question

現(xiàn)在我們的社會提倡節(jié)約能源, 建設(shè)節(jié)約型社會。你校舉辦了一次”為建設(shè)節(jié)約型社會獻(xiàn)計(jì)”的活動,。見到每屆畢業(yè)生畢業(yè)時(shí)都會把大量完好的參考書扔掉，你提出一個(gè)建議----鼓勵畢業(yè)生把參考書留給下一屆的學(xué)生使用, 你的理由是:
●節(jié)約資源;                                ● 有利于建設(shè)一個(gè)能源節(jié)約型社會;
● 書上的筆記很有用;                  ● 國外(如澳大利亞)已有成功的做法.
1. 學(xué)生們畢業(yè)時(shí)對待參考書的現(xiàn)狀；
2. 你的建議及理由。
只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容.

Answer 1

One possible version:
As we all know, when senior students graduate from school, most of their reference books are thrown away, which are still in good condition. What great waste it is, so I suggest that we should recycle the books. On the one hand, recycling them can save a lot of natural resources, which are used to make textbooks. On the other hand, senior students may have made plenty of useful notes on the pages that are very useful to the following users. In fact, in Australia and some other countries, recycling reference books is popular, which gives us a good example, so I think it is meaningful for us to build an energy-saving society.

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類作文。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來，所寫的話題也是考生所熟悉的。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于提綱類作文，關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括在內(nèi)。審題時(shí)一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。