Question

16．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（╲）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞．
          2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
We are in an age when people take picture everywhere．They enjoy it even when in a museum or invited for a meal．A report shows that teens in many countries，especially in China，is always seen taking pictures update their websites with them．Besides，they are serious about getting 100 likes because of getting anything less is considered embarrassed．Some parents worry that this type of thinking is far too competitively for teens．And some teens don't think so．"If I got wrap up in my likes or views，I'd go crazy．Never let your values be determined by how someone else thinks．"

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分析 文章大意：我們處于一個年代，人們到處拍照片．一個報道表明，很多國家尤其在中國，我們經(jīng)�？吹角嗌倌昱恼崭�新網(wǎng)頁．這些青少年不在乎別人的看法．．

解答 We are in an age when people take  pictureeverywhere．They enjoy it even when in a museum or invited  for a meal．
                                                      pictures                                                                                         to
A report shows that teens in many countries，especially in China，is always seen taking pictures∧update their websites with them．
                                                                                                  are                                      to
Besides，they are serious about getting 100 likes because  of  getting anything less is considered embarrassed．Some parents worry
                                                                                     去掉                                                 embarrassing
that this type of thinking is far too competitively  for teens．And some teens don't think so．"If I got wrap up in my likes or views，
                                                    competitive                   But                                                           wrapped
I'd go crazy．Never let your values be determined by how someone else thinks．"
                                                                                 what

1．take picture 改成take pictures    考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)． take pictures 是固定短語，意思是"拍照片"，picture是可數(shù)名詞，所以用復(fù)數(shù)． 
2．invited for 改成invited to  考查介詞搭配． invite sb to sth是固定搭配，用介詞to，不是for．
3．is always改成 are always     考查主謂一致．本句主語是teens，所以用are．
4．update 改成 to update 考查不定式． see sb do sth 看到某人做某事，當(dāng)用于被動語態(tài)時，sb  be seen to do sth，do前面要加上to．
5．because of 改成 because     考查從屬連詞．后面是句子，of是介詞，because of后面跟的是名詞或名詞短語．所以去掉of．
6．embarrassed改成embarrassing 考查形容詞，修飾物或事情用-ing形式．本句的主語是動名詞，所以用embarrassing．
7．competitively 改成 competitive  考查形容詞． 系動詞后面應(yīng)該用形容詞．
8．And 改成 But 考查連詞，前后兩句是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以用but．
9．got wrap 改成 got wrapped      考查語態(tài)． get wrapped up意思是沉溺于…，該短語應(yīng)該用被動式，所以用wrapped．
10．by how 改成 by what 考查名詞性從句，by 后面是賓語從句，從句中缺少賓語，所以用what．

點評 短文改錯主要要求考生掌握各種句法、語法知識，根據(jù)一些規(guī)律，再結(jié)合文章的意思作出正確的該正．注意文章的時態(tài)和人稱．