Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李華。上周，你和同學(xué)參加了學(xué)校舉辦的“創(chuàng)新設(shè)計(jì)”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，記述你們?cè)O(shè)計(jì)聲控垃圾桶的整個(gè)過程，并以“A Memorable Activity”為題，給校刊“英語園地”寫一篇英文稿件。詞數(shù)不少于 60。

提示詞：創(chuàng)新設(shè)計(jì) Innovation Design

聲控垃圾桶 voice-controlled trash bin

Answer 1

【答案】A Memorable Activity

Last week there was an Innovation Design activity in our school.

On Monday afternoon, my classmates and I had a discussion and we decided to make a voice-controlled trash bin to take part in the activity. During the following days we made full preparations after class. Firstly, we did some research work on the Internet. Then, according to the design, we bought necessary materials and began to work on it. Although it was really a hard job, we all did it with great enthusiasm. Two days later, a voice-controlled trash bin was born. On Friday afternoon, our production won the competition.

We were really satisfied and felt proud of ourselves. What an exciting experience!

【解析】

這是一篇圖畫類寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李華。上周，你和同學(xué)參加了學(xué)校舉辦的“創(chuàng)新設(shè)計(jì)”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，記述你們?cè)O(shè)計(jì)聲控垃圾桶的整個(gè)過程，并以“A Memorable Activity”為題，給校刊“英語園地”寫一篇英文稿件。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：Innovation Design (創(chuàng)新設(shè)計(jì))；voice-controlled trash bin (聲控垃圾桶)；make full preparations (做充分準(zhǔn)備)；according to (根據(jù))；with great enthusiasm (帶著熱情)等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。