Question

假如你們學校“英語愛好者俱樂部”將對“良好飲食習慣”這一話題進行討論。請根據(jù)下列提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容要點應包括：

部分同學的飲食習慣	良好的飲食習慣	個人看法
不吃早餐 愛吃零食 偏食 飲食過量	飲食多樣化 飲食定時定量	重要性：有助于 身體健康……

注意：1．發(fā)言稿必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當發(fā)揮；

2．發(fā)言稿開頭與結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3．詞數(shù)：100左右。

4．參考詞匯：偏食be particular about food 零食snack

Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits.

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That’s all. Thank you!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat.  Therefore, it's very important for us to form healthy eating habits.

However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks; some others are particular about food; and still some eat or drink too much.. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.

To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we'd better have meals regularly.

In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：本文是關于良好的飲食習慣的短文，用文章的要點都已經(jīng)給出，考生只需要翻譯即可。要注意使用合適的連接詞，如however, firstly, secondly, thirdly； besides等讓各個要點連接成完整的整體，成為一篇文章。選詞方面要使用合適的高級詞匯來提升文章的層次。個人觀點時可以使用：One apple keeps doctors away等諺語。

考點：考查提綱類短文

點評：提綱類作文的關鍵是要點不能省略，要完全包括在內(nèi)。要注意使用合適的連接詞和高級的詞匯和短語，也可以使用不同的句式。本文考生完全可以使用適當?shù)闹V語來提升文章的層次。