Question

14．下學(xué)期，你們學(xué)校將引進一名新的外教，學(xué)校針對需要引進什么樣的外教，以及如何利用好外教資源向在校師生廣泛征求意見．請你以學(xué)生李敏的名義，給負責該項目的黃老師寫一封電子郵件，提出你的建議，并陳述理由．郵件須包含以下內(nèi)容：
•你對引進什么樣外教的建議及理由；
•你對如何利用好外教資源的建議及理由．
Dear Mr．Huang，
I'm a student of senior three and myname is Li Min．Knowing that you are taking charge of the recruit of a foreignteacher for our school，I'm now writing to you to state some of my opinionsabout this matter．
With regard to the qualities of theforeign teacher，there are two aspects that we should place great importanceon．First of all，being humorous and imaginative are necessary for the teacher，which enable the class to be enjoyable and lively．For another，tomaintain the efficiency of teaching and learning，the foreigner's abilitytospeak Chinese is important，since it is certain that sometimes students cannotexpress themselves in English．
So as tomake full use of the foreign teacher resources，a variety of outdooractivities，such as English Evening and English Corner，can be held by theforeign language teacher，which provides the students with more opportunitiesto communicate with the teacher and to improve their oral English．
I will bedelighted if you can take my advice into account．Thank you．
Sincerely Yours，
Li Min
注：郵件中不得提及你的真實姓名或?qū)W校．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一封郵件，就學(xué)校針對需要引進什么樣的外教，以及如何利用好外教資源的問題給負責該項目的黃老師提出自己的建議并陳述理由．
寫作時人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
寫作要點：1．對引進什么樣外教的建議和及理由；2．對如何利用好外教資源的建議及資源．
重要短語：take charge of（負責），with regard to （關(guān)于），place greatimportance on sth （重視某事），enablesb to do （能夠讓某人做某事），maintain theefficiency of （保持…的有效性），be under control （在控制，掌握之中），in advance（提前），be of great importance （有重要性），so as to （為了），make full use of （充分利用），a variety of（各種各樣的），provide sb with sth （提供某人某物），communicate with…（與…交流），take sth intoaccount（把…考慮在內(nèi)）．
【高分句型】
1．Knowing that you are taking charge of the recruit of a foreign teacher for our school，I'm now writing to you to state some of my opinions about this matter．
這里是由現(xiàn)在分詞+賓語從句作原因狀語，主句為"I'm now writing to you to state some of my opinions about this matter"，主句的主語為I，與所給動詞know存在邏輯上的主動關(guān)系．
2．With regard to the qualities of the foreign teacher，there are two aspects that we should place great importance on．
這里是由that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為aspects，that在定語從句中作賓語．
3．being humorous and imaginative ①are necessary for the teacher，②which enable the class to be enjoyable and lively．
①這里是由動名詞作主語，謂語動詞為are，表語為necessary for the teacher．

②這里是由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which在定語從句中作主語，指代前面整個主句的內(nèi)容．


4．it is certain that sometimes students cannot express themselves in English．


這里是由it引導(dǎo)的形式主語，此句為主語從句，結(jié)構(gòu)為"It is certain that+句子"，意為"可以肯定的是…"．

解答 Dear Mr．Huang，
     I'm a student ofsenior three and my name is Li Min．Knowing that you are taking charge of therecruit of a foreign teacher for our school，I'm now writing to you to statesome of my opinions about this matter．【高分句型】（開頭-寫信目的，引出話題）
     With regard to thequalities of the foreign teacher，there are two aspects that we should placegreat importance on．【高分句型】First of all，being humorous and imaginative are necessary for the teacher，which enable the class to be enjoyable and lively．【高分句型】Foranother，to maintain the efficiency of teaching and learning，the foreigner'sability to speak Chinese is important，since it is certain that sometimesstudents cannot express themselves in English．【高分句型】（開頭-寫信目的，引出話題）
So asto make full use of the foreign teacher resources，a variety of outdooractivities，such as English Evening and English Corner，can be held by theforeign language teacher，which provides the students with more opportunitiesto communicate with the teacher and to improve their oral English．【高分句型】
I will bedelighted if you can take my advice into account．Thank you．
                                                                    Sincerely Yours，
                                                                     Li Min

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．