Question

2．下面是某高中對200名高三學(xué)生每天睡眠時間不足及其原因所做調(diào)查的結(jié)果．請根據(jù)圖1提供的信息描述高三學(xué)生的睡眠情況，并針對圖2中任何一個數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況分析原因，并提出你的看法．
參考詞匯：圖表 chart n．
注意：1．文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；
2．詞數(shù) 100 左右．
We have made a survey recently about how much time Senior 3 students can sleep every day among 200 students in a senior high school．The result shows that sixty-two percent of the students sleep just less than seven hours each day，while thirty-seven percent of them can sleep seven to eight hours．However，only one percent of them say they can sleep over eight hours．We can conclude that most of Senior 3 students don't have enough sleep．
From Chart 2，we learn the reasons why most Senior 3 students don't have enough sleep．The students who don't have enough sleep because of staying up make up thirty-five percent of all the 200 students．
For the sake of the health of the students，I think it is unwise to stay up too late．Only when we have a good sleep can we have the energy to make the best of the daytime in an effective way．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
The result shows that sixty-two percent of the students sleep just less than seven hours each day，while thirty-seven percent of them can sleep seven to eight hours
結(jié)果表明，百分之六十二的學(xué)生每天睡眠不超過七小時，而百分之三十七的人可以睡七到八個小時．
高分句型二：
Only when we have a good sleep can we have the energy to make the best of the daytime in an effective way．
只有好好睡一覺，我們才能有充分利用白天的精力．

解答 We have made a survey recently about how much time Senior 3 students can sleep every day among 200 students in a senior high school．The result shows that sixty-two percent of the students sleep just less than seven hours each day，while thirty-seven percent of them can sleep seven to eight hours（高分句型一）．However，only one percent of them say they can sleep over eight hours．We can conclude that most of Senior 3 students don't have enough sleep．
From Chart 2，we learn the reasons why most Senior 3 students don't have enough sleep．The students who don't have enough sleep because of staying up make up thirty-five percent of all the 200 students．
For the sake of the health of the students，I think it is unwise to stay up too late．Only when we have a good sleep can we have the energy to make the best of the daytime in an effective way（高分句型二）．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．