Question

假設(shè)學(xué)生李華，你的英國筆友Jack剛轉(zhuǎn)入一所新學(xué)校，感到一切都很陌生。他在郵件中向你詢問如何盡快融入新環(huán)境。請你根據(jù)以下信息回信。

1. 多跟同學(xué)交流溝通；

2. 積極參加學(xué)�；顒�；

3. 向老師尋求幫助。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jack,

I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school.

 

 

 

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Jack,

I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful.

First, I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible. In this way, you will get to know each other better. Second, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships. Lastly, faced with some tough problems, you might consider asking your teachers, who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions.

I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you. If there is anything more I can do to help, please let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文。假設(shè)學(xué)生李華，你的英國筆友Jack剛轉(zhuǎn)入一所新學(xué)校，感到一切都很陌生。他在郵件中向你詢問如何盡快融入新環(huán)境。請你根據(jù)以下信息回信。1. 多跟同學(xué)交流溝通；2. 積極參加學(xué)校活動；3. 向老師尋求幫助。需要寫的提綱已經(jīng)給出，需要就此寫一篇文章。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意字?jǐn)?shù)，詞數(shù)100左右。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】Second, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships. 這里含有一個非限制性定語從句；Lastly, faced with some tough problems, you might consider asking your teachers, who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions.

這里含有一個非限制性定語從句。

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