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13．面對繁重的學(xué)業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)，很多學(xué)生出現(xiàn)了不同程度的心理和身體方面的不適．鑒于此種情況，中學(xué)生應(yīng)該學(xué)會放松．假入你是中學(xué)生李華，請以How to Relax Ourselves為題寫一篇文章給《21世紀(jì)英語報》投稿
內(nèi)容包括：
1．為什么要學(xué)會自我放松；
2．自我放松的途徑（如看電視﹑上網(wǎng)﹑體育鍛煉﹑旅游等）
3．你更喜歡哪種自我放松方式及原因
注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；
2．文章開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
How to Relax Ourselves
Faced with heavy learning burdens，many of us studentsoften feel tired both psychologically and mentally．If the situationcontinues，it will have a negative influence on our life and study．In view of this，we are supposed to learn to relax ourselves．As you know，there are various ways to relax ourselves．As you know，there are various ways to relaxourselves，such as watching TV，surfing the Internet，taking regular exercise and traveling．
As for me，I prefer surfing the Internet in my share time．For one thing，theInternet provides me with a wide range of activities for relaxation．Sometimes I keep track of the latest news as an entertainment．I also play computer gamesto relax myself．For another，the Internet gives me easy access to making friends with people at home and abroad．Furthermore，the vivid pictures on theInternet can greatly refresh me when I feel tired．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料，以"How to Relax Ourselves"為題給《21世紀(jì)英語報》投稿，寫一篇稿件．寫作要點包括：1．為什么要學(xué)會自我放松；2．自我放松的途徑（如看電視、上網(wǎng)、體育鍛煉、旅游等）；3．你更喜歡哪種自我放松方式及原因．寫作時應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主．重要短語：be facedwith  （面臨），havea negative influence on （有消極影響），in view of（考慮到，鑒于），besupposed to do sth  （應(yīng)該做某事），relaxoneself （自我放松），provide sb with sth（提供某人某物），a wide range of （許多各種不同的），keep track of （跟蹤，記錄），give sb easy access to （某人更容易…）．

解答 Faced with heavy learning burdens，many of usstudents often feel tired both psychologically and mentally．【高分句型】If the situation continues，it will have a negative influence on ourlife and study．In view of this，we are supposed to learn to relax ourselves．（為什么要學(xué)會自我放松）As you know，there are various ways to relaxourselves．As you know，there are various ways to relax ourselves，such aswatching TV，surfing the Internet，taking regular exercise and traveling．（自我放松的途徑）
   As for me，I prefer surfing the Internet in my share time．For one thing，the Internetprovides me with a wide range of activities for relaxation．Sometimes I keeptrack of the latest news as an entertainment．I also play computer games torelax myself．For another，the Internet gives me easy access to making friendswith people at home and abroad．Furthermore，the vivid pictures on the Internetcan greatly refresh me when I feel tired．（自己更喜歡上網(wǎng)來放松及原因）

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．