Question

【題目】假設(shè)你叫李華，你的朋友沉迷于微信（WeChat）而不能自拔，寫信向你尋求幫助，請你給他回一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容包括：

1.表示理解和關(guān)心；2.提出具體建議。

要求：1。詞數(shù)100左右；2�？梢赃m當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3。格式與詞尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear John,

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I hope these ideas can help you get rid of your addiction as soon as possible.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

I’m sorry to here that you’re suffering from WeChat addiction. I really understand how you feel and I’d like to offer you some useful advice that I think will benefit you.

First of all, I suggest that you should start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music, or playing chess, etc, which will take your mind off WeChat. Secondly, you’d better make more friends through face-to-face communication. They’ll assist you when you can’t resist the temptation of WeChat. Thirdly, it’s better for you to do some sports instead of using WeChat a lot because sports can not only keep you healthy but also enrich your life and help you forget WeChat.

I hope these ideas can help you get rid of your addiction as soon as possible. Best wishes!

【解析】試題分析：假設(shè)你叫李華，你的朋友沉迷于微信（WeChat）而不能自拔，寫信向你尋求幫助，請你給他回一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容包括：表示理解和關(guān)心；提出具體建議。寫作時把所提示的點寫全，但不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫，同時注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)。適當使用并列連詞，合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點說明】

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