Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤儀涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號 ), 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線( \ )劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下畫-橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意: 1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限-詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Nancy, aged 65, is one of my special friend. 1 like chatting with her but she enjoys my company. We talk about everything and kept no secrets from each other. It's nice of her to give me so many wise advice, from that 1 have benefited a lot. Last Saturday I visited her as usually. When I knocked at the door, there was no answer. Looked through the window, I was shocked to see her lying on floor. Immediately, I called 120. Minutes late, an ambulance arrived and took her to the hospital. She thanked to me for having saved her life. I was happy to have done that.

Answer 1

【答案】1. friend → friends

2. but → and

3. kept → keep

4. many → much

5. that → which

6. usually → usual

7. Looked → Looking

8.在on和floor之間加the

9. late → later

10.去掉thanked和me之間的to

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章講述了，作者和南希好朋友，有一次作者去南希家拜訪，作者發(fā)現(xiàn)南希暈倒了，立刻叫救護車，救了南希的命。

1.考查名詞的數(shù)。one of +可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，意為“……中之一”，所以應(yīng)用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將friend改為friends。

2.考查連詞。分析句子可知，前句“我喜歡和她聊天”和后句“她喜歡我的陪伴”，是并列關(guān)系，應(yīng)用and。故將but改為and。

3.考查時態(tài)。分析句子可知，前句謂語動詞talk用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，前后兩句是并列句，時態(tài)保持一致，所以后句謂語動詞也應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時。故將kept改為keep。

4.考查much的用法。分析句子可知，wise advice 是不可數(shù)名詞短語，much修飾不可數(shù)名詞，many修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)。故將many改為much。

5.考查非限制性定語從句關(guān)系代詞。分析句子可知，wise advice后面接了一個非限制性定語從句，wise advice是先行詞，指物，在從句中做from的賓語，應(yīng)用關(guān)系代詞which，非限制性定語從句中關(guān)系詞不能用that。故將that改為which。

6.考查固定搭配。as usual是固定搭配，意為“通�！�。故將usually改為usual。

7.考查現(xiàn)在分詞。分析句子可知，此句無連詞且已有謂語動詞was，所以look要用非謂語形式做狀語，look和主語I之間是邏輯上的主動關(guān)系，所以用現(xiàn)在分詞（doing）表主動。故將Looked改為Looking。

8. 考查固定搭配。on the floor是固定搭配，意為“在地上”。故在on和floor之間加the。

9.考查副詞。分析句子可知，“30分鐘之后”在句子中做狀語，副詞做狀語，應(yīng)用副詞later。故將late改為later。

10. 考查固定搭配。thank sb. for doing sth.是固定搭配，意為“因做某事感謝某人”，應(yīng)去掉to。故去掉thanked和me之間的to。