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【題目】假定你是李華，目前在英國某中學(xué)做交換生。學(xué)校公告欄上一則出售二手筆記本電腦的廣告引起了你的興趣。

FOR SALE

Lenovo Yoga 300 laptop in excellent condition

4GB RAM and 64 GB hard drive

Price:155

Contact Heck at jheck@aef.com

請用英語寫一封電子郵件，咨詢有關(guān)電腦的詳情。內(nèi)容主要包括：

表明寫作意圖；

詢問相關(guān)信息：是否有原始購機(jī)發(fā)票（invoice),是否維修過，如何付款。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，已使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Heck,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Heck,

I am writing for more information about the laptop advertised on the school bulletin board. I would appreciate it if you could be kind enough to answer the following question. First of all, do you still have the original invoice for the laptop? Secondly, I would like to know whether the laptop has any problems. Have you ever had it repaired? Lastly, where and how can we conclude a deal if both of us agree to one? By the way, would it be possible to give me a 10% discount considering the storage of the laptop is rather small.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是應(yīng)用文，要求詢問對學(xué)校公告欄上貼出的出售的二手筆記本電腦進(jìn)行咨詢，內(nèi)容要求包括：第一部分表明自己的寫作意圖；第二部分詢問相關(guān)信息：是否有原始購機(jī)發(fā)票（invoice),是否維修過，如何付款。最后表達(dá)愿望，希望對方盡快回復(fù)。

寫作時要按照咨詢信結(jié)構(gòu)，注意寫全要點，條理清楚。還要盡量使用高級詞匯和句型來增加亮點。

【亮點說明】本文要點全面，使用了高級詞匯和高級句型。如：First of all, Secondly, Lastly, By the way的使用使文章條理清楚，銜接自然；使用了過去分詞advertised on the school bulletin board. I would appreciate it if…句型，賓語從句whether the laptop has any problems.等為文章增色添彩。