Question

假如你叫李華，是一位高中學生。請你用英語給某報社寫一封信，反映如下情況和你的想法：
　　1. 教室是學生學習的地方，需要安靜。
　　2. 有些學生把手機帶進教室，在課堂上經常聽見手機的鈴聲。
　　3. 有的同學還在課堂上發(fā)短信息，浪費寶貴的學習時間。
　　4. 建議有手機的同學上課時應把手機關掉，不要接聽電話或發(fā)短信息，集中注意力學習。
注意：1. 信的開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數；
2. 詞數: 100左右；
Dear Editor,
I’m a senior high student
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
I'm a senior high student. In my opinion, the classroom is a place for students to gain knowledge. Therefore quietness is badly needed for us to learn our lessons. But recently some students bring their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear the ring of mobile phones. Some of them even waste precious time in class typing short messages on the mobile phone.
To keep the classroom quiet, those with mobile phones should not talk on the phone or send short messages. They should turn them off. We are supposed to concentrate on our studies.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查應用文中的書信的寫作。同時也屬于提綱類作文，要點都已經給出，審題時注意本文使用一般現在時，描述要點時以時間為順序，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用省略句，倒裝句和強調句型準確表述。
點評：提綱類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，本文以時間為序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。