Question

最近我校舉辦了一次英語(yǔ)書法比賽。大部分同學(xué)們積極參與，但少數(shù)同學(xué)書寫不好，也不愿改善。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，給《二十一世紀(jì)報(bào)》寫一篇短文，分析該現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因并發(fā)表自己的看法。

 

現(xiàn)象	一些學(xué)生不善書寫，也不愿改善書寫
原因	1.可以借助電腦，沒(méi)有必要練字；  2.功課太忙，沒(méi)時(shí)間練字； 3.練字見效慢，很難練好。
你的看法	……

 

注意：

1．詞數(shù)120左右；

2．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

書面表達(dá)：

In order to arouse the students' interest in English learning and enrich our school life, we

held an English Handwriting Competition.__________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

In order to arouse the students’ interest in English learning and enrich our school life, we held an English Handwriting Competition. Many students took an active part in the activity. However, some students who are poor at handwriting don’t want to improve their handwriting. The reasons are as follows:

On one hand, they think that there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting because they can just use a computer. On the other hand, they believe that they are too busy with their studies to find time to practice. Besides, practicing handwriting is so difficult that they can’t make great progress in a short time.

In my view, Students’ beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to themselves. What’s more, good handwriting is always appreciated by people, especially by teachers. Therefore, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達(dá)：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái). 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】some students who are poor at handwriting don’t want to improve their handwriting.這句話里面用了定語(yǔ)從句， they think that there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting because they can just use a computer. 這里用了there is no need to do...句型，和because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，On the other hand, they believe that they are too busy with their studies to find time to practice.這里是too...to...句型，還有這篇范文有個(gè)明顯的特點(diǎn)，就是關(guān)聯(lián)詞很多，如on one hand...， On the other hand, Besides，Therefore，What’s more等，這樣文章顯得很連貫。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類書面表達(dá)